for Seniors4/25/2009 c9 on the edge of insanity
Great story. Really good plot and such.
Just a few grammatical errors:
We'll is we all not well
"" These are for when people are speaking not '' those
and when you use his its suppose to be he
ex: ‘We’ll his neither of those things,’
is suppose to be
"Well he's neither of those things,"
Great story. Really good plot and such.
Just a few grammatical errors:
We'll is we all not well
"" These are for when people are speaking not '' those
and when you use his its suppose to be he
ex: ‘We’ll his neither of those things,’
is suppose to be
"Well he's neither of those things,"
12/19/2008 c36 lian
You deserve infinitely more reviews! I re-read this story every couple of months and I always fall in love with Alex. You created a very studly character, and I'm glad the story is still alive.
You deserve infinitely more reviews! I re-read this story every couple of months and I always fall in love with Alex. You created a very studly character, and I'm glad the story is still alive.
11/5/2008 c1 Alice
I loved this story, easily one of my favs i would have loved to read about when alex found out jake and vince were gay that would have been hilarias !
LOVE YOUR WRITTING!
I loved this story, easily one of my favs i would have loved to read about when alex found out jake and vince were gay that would have been hilarias !
LOVE YOUR WRITTING!
10/4/2008 c36 
9IHateMyLoveLife
It was the most totally awesome cliche. Everyone is happy together. Just a perfect happily ever after. You did have a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes. I'd be happy to fix them for you. No problem. I need something to do.
9IHateMyLoveLifeIt was the most totally awesome cliche. Everyone is happy together. Just a perfect happily ever after. You did have a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes. I'd be happy to fix them for you. No problem. I need something to do.
7/29/2008 c36 2Love.Hug.Kiss
i just loved ur story ive sat here for like 3 hours reading the whole thing i felel in love with ur characther
2Love.Hug.Kissi just loved ur story ive sat here for like 3 hours reading the whole thing i felel in love with ur characther
7/25/2008 c1 2NattieLove
i love it even though i only read part of chap on i love it but i gtg so read more later
2NattieLovei love it even though i only read part of chap on i love it but i gtg so read more later
6/13/2008 c2 4RunFree
Really good...and yeah a cross country story...yes i am a runner!
Anyway Alex is Corin's friend right?
4RunFreeReally good...and yeah a cross country story...yes i am a runner!
Anyway Alex is Corin's friend right?
2/24/2008 c36 Hopelessly Clueless
I love this story, I love the whole brothers over protective thing, its oh so cute! Like you Im a sucker for happy endings, and I love how this one turned out! Great job, can't wait to see more of your writing! :D
I love this story, I love the whole brothers over protective thing, its oh so cute! Like you Im a sucker for happy endings, and I love how this one turned out! Great job, can't wait to see more of your writing! :D
1/6/2008 c36 toazdo
Wow..
This is the third time I've read this story and I still love it! I don't think I'll ever grow tired of it =) it's just that good..
Great, great story! Thanks! Can't wait to read more from you in the future..
Wow..
This is the third time I've read this story and I still love it! I don't think I'll ever grow tired of it =) it's just that good..
Great, great story! Thanks! Can't wait to read more from you in the future..
7/31/2007 c36 frackandbonechick
That was beautifully written, it was a pleasure to read!
Thanks
Michelle
That was beautifully written, it was a pleasure to read!
Thanks
Michelle