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2/19/2007 c1 Orual
I really like this. It flows well. I like the way you capture all sort of anger and frustration and hurt and then pacify it with "remember me." The only mistake I noticed was "fee worthless." I think you want "feel." Other than that, excellent work.
8/20/2005 c1 12Autumn's Soundtrack
Oh my goodness Twitchy, I've lost my mind like you and made one of these!

Like the poem. Very pious. Now let me see if I can find the one about Patricia.


-Double Trouble
6/27/2005 c1 Celesma
Beatifully written and echoes one of the great Truths of the faith . . . that God desires even (or especially) the broken heart of worship; and that He will never forget us or His promise to us!

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