for Trapped12/3/2005 c1 
19Rhea Valente
HAHAHAHHAHAHHAHHAHAHHAHAA! OMG! That's SOO funny! WAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHHA! *dies laughing*
Oh boy, that was BRILLIANT! Goin STRAIGHT on my favs list! ^^
I hope you write more crazy stuff like this! It's GOLD!
HAHAHAHHGAHAA...
~wolfeh (21.36)
19Rhea ValenteHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHHAHAHHAHAA! OMG! That's SOO funny! WAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHHA! *dies laughing*
Oh boy, that was BRILLIANT! Goin STRAIGHT on my favs list! ^^
I hope you write more crazy stuff like this! It's GOLD!
HAHAHAHHGAHAA...
~wolfeh (21.36)
7/6/2005 c1 J.J. Bhangley
Hahahahaha! This is great work. I like the script style, it gives more focus to the dialogue, which is excellent because it's so hilarious. I would love to see this as a longer work, or maybe see more funny sketches like this. Keep writing and posting!
Hahahahaha! This is great work. I like the script style, it gives more focus to the dialogue, which is excellent because it's so hilarious. I would love to see this as a longer work, or maybe see more funny sketches like this. Keep writing and posting!
6/27/2005 c1 9Michael Gerard
(polite chortle) Very funny. It's cleverly written and the characters are well defined. I have to say I haven't come across many script-type stories on here, and this one is deliciously impressive. Marvellous! Write more stuff!
9Michael Gerard(polite chortle) Very funny. It's cleverly written and the characters are well defined. I have to say I haven't come across many script-type stories on here, and this one is deliciously impressive. Marvellous! Write more stuff!
6/27/2005 c1 6Green Beret
If this is your best stuff, im glad man coz this is brilliant!
The humour, unlike being specifically slapstick, is bloody clever stuff as well so make sure you put the rest of your stuff on FP.com ASAP!
6Green BeretIf this is your best stuff, im glad man coz this is brilliant!
The humour, unlike being specifically slapstick, is bloody clever stuff as well so make sure you put the rest of your stuff on FP.com ASAP!