for Magiseeker8/11/2008 c6 
1Grey Jester
You need to sign back on and finish your stories, girl. I am enjoying them too much. Especially with all those Pratchett-esque moments I keep running into.
1Grey JesterYou need to sign back on and finish your stories, girl. I am enjoying them too much. Especially with all those Pratchett-esque moments I keep running into.
11/12/2005 c6 26PNEK MEKS
I object! I do NOT wanna wait around for you to decide on weather or not you wanna keep writing deoman! I DEMAND IT GET WRITTEN! I DEMAND IT! Don't make me start a war with you! One with nasty comments and flamming! GRAH!
PNEK MEKS
P.S. oh yeah...this was an okay chap too...GRAAH!
26PNEK MEKSI object! I do NOT wanna wait around for you to decide on weather or not you wanna keep writing deoman! I DEMAND IT GET WRITTEN! I DEMAND IT! Don't make me start a war with you! One with nasty comments and flamming! GRAH!
PNEK MEKS
P.S. oh yeah...this was an okay chap too...GRAAH!
10/15/2005 c5 PNEK MEKS
okay, short yes, but not bad. Acceptable at the least. Can't wait for the next one! Ta!
PNEK MEKS
okay, short yes, but not bad. Acceptable at the least. Can't wait for the next one! Ta!
PNEK MEKS
10/12/2005 c5 22Artemis Darkclaw
that was a good chapter. nice ending too.can't wait for more.
-Artemis
22Artemis Darkclawthat was a good chapter. nice ending too.can't wait for more.
-Artemis
9/29/2005 c3 9Eyetk
Oh, dear. I owe you for not reviewing this earlier...much, much earlier.
Well done on this chapter! I particularily liked it in the first bit where it was stated that magic had no problem with technology. Somehow, that seems to reflect on a whole lot o' things...but I'm getting sidetracked.
One thing that -did- bug me, however, as a grammar/punctuation/capitalization nazi (for posted writing, at least...as much as a hypocrit as I might sound right about now, I don't care so much when it's a review...) was when you used tripple !. NO! BAD!
Sorry, done twitching now. Punctuation naziness out of my system.
However, I do have two more CCs for you. One is a superficial one, like the one about the !...the other is about the last sentence here. "And with doubt and reconsidering so strong the weakest of mind readers would have been able to hear it"...that's just a doozy, and more than a bit awkward. Rewrite eet?
Okay...the other CC I have is a -big- CC. And by that I mean...well, bigger than normal-sorry! However...eight seals? Breaking? Sorry, but it's just...been done a lot. Too much. Running away from people trying to wipe out magic is a good enough reason to run, neh-and the way you've done it up to now is quite original. Adding in stuff about 'keepers of eight seals' just...well...just...meh. I just like your setting and backdrop so much...-please- don't get too rolled up in a grand plot that's already been done. Please?
Okay, I'm not exactly as my most tactful now, so I'll shut up. On the whole, though, I liked this individual chapter, aside from a few bits here and there. Poor Marcy...
9EyetkOh, dear. I owe you for not reviewing this earlier...much, much earlier.
Well done on this chapter! I particularily liked it in the first bit where it was stated that magic had no problem with technology. Somehow, that seems to reflect on a whole lot o' things...but I'm getting sidetracked.
One thing that -did- bug me, however, as a grammar/punctuation/capitalization nazi (for posted writing, at least...as much as a hypocrit as I might sound right about now, I don't care so much when it's a review...) was when you used tripple !. NO! BAD!
Sorry, done twitching now. Punctuation naziness out of my system.
However, I do have two more CCs for you. One is a superficial one, like the one about the !...the other is about the last sentence here. "And with doubt and reconsidering so strong the weakest of mind readers would have been able to hear it"...that's just a doozy, and more than a bit awkward. Rewrite eet?
Okay...the other CC I have is a -big- CC. And by that I mean...well, bigger than normal-sorry! However...eight seals? Breaking? Sorry, but it's just...been done a lot. Too much. Running away from people trying to wipe out magic is a good enough reason to run, neh-and the way you've done it up to now is quite original. Adding in stuff about 'keepers of eight seals' just...well...just...meh. I just like your setting and backdrop so much...-please- don't get too rolled up in a grand plot that's already been done. Please?
Okay, I'm not exactly as my most tactful now, so I'll shut up. On the whole, though, I liked this individual chapter, aside from a few bits here and there. Poor Marcy...
8/23/2005 c4 22Artemis Darkclaw
very short but good. interesting...very interesting. well i sure hope they become clear eventually. what was that bit about the animated movie about? well good job. can't wait for next update.
-Artemis
22Artemis Darkclawvery short but good. interesting...very interesting. well i sure hope they become clear eventually. what was that bit about the animated movie about? well good job. can't wait for next update.
-Artemis
8/15/2005 c3 Artemis Darkclaw
nice chapter, nice cliffhanger ending too. i'd liked Marny...too bad he had to die. question...umm how could ordinary bullets kill a Vampire? just curious. anyway nice chap. will be waiting for next update as well as next Deoman update.
-Artemis
nice chapter, nice cliffhanger ending too. i'd liked Marny...too bad he had to die. question...umm how could ordinary bullets kill a Vampire? just curious. anyway nice chap. will be waiting for next update as well as next Deoman update.
-Artemis
8/6/2005 c3 26PNEK MEKS
HI! Sorry about not responding to the newest chapter of deoman! I did read it...i just got kicked or...soemthing like that...which caused inconvience in reviewing. Well...I really like Magiseeker and I think you shoudl deffinetly continued...i enjoyed the pizza arguement...and am rather upset that Marcy died...though he was a jerk and I'm also kinda gald he did...anywho...please make sure you write more to deoman! AND HURRY! I don't think I have long to live...some sort of desease is affecting me that has soemthing to do with having sex witha rubber chicken...
PNEK MEKS
26PNEK MEKSHI! Sorry about not responding to the newest chapter of deoman! I did read it...i just got kicked or...soemthing like that...which caused inconvience in reviewing. Well...I really like Magiseeker and I think you shoudl deffinetly continued...i enjoyed the pizza arguement...and am rather upset that Marcy died...though he was a jerk and I'm also kinda gald he did...anywho...please make sure you write more to deoman! AND HURRY! I don't think I have long to live...some sort of desease is affecting me that has soemthing to do with having sex witha rubber chicken...
PNEK MEKS
8/5/2005 c3 6aGirlinPort
I like this story a lot. I think that maybe the second chapter might be a little unnecessary. It might be better to work that information into the story. This story is suspenseful, original, with a lot of good action. I would definitely like to read more.
6aGirlinPortI like this story a lot. I think that maybe the second chapter might be a little unnecessary. It might be better to work that information into the story. This story is suspenseful, original, with a lot of good action. I would definitely like to read more.
8/4/2005 c3 24The FiboNACHI Sequence
cool! very cool! although... yes, i'm going to be an annoying little git and beg you to finish Deoman 2 first... i like marcy.. vampires are second in my line of favorite creatures... after werewolfs...you mighe be able to tell from my stories! hahaha write on!
24The FiboNACHI Sequencecool! very cool! although... yes, i'm going to be an annoying little git and beg you to finish Deoman 2 first... i like marcy.. vampires are second in my line of favorite creatures... after werewolfs...you mighe be able to tell from my stories! hahaha write on!
7/11/2005 c2 22Artemis Darkclaw
nice history lesson. explains quite a bit. but jeez...can it get any shorter? i will now anxiously await your next chapter as well as the next update on Deoman. please update soon as i may contract some dire critical illness and die within days. not likely ofcourse but if it helps you update sooner... -Artemis
22Artemis Darkclawnice history lesson. explains quite a bit. but jeez...can it get any shorter? i will now anxiously await your next chapter as well as the next update on Deoman. please update soon as i may contract some dire critical illness and die within days. not likely ofcourse but if it helps you update sooner... -Artemis
7/11/2005 c1 Artemis Darkclaw
great start. this looks like its going to be very interesting. I like Marcy, a figured he was a vampire before you actually mentioned the nocturnal bit from the Count part of his name. I dont know, probably b/c i just read Dracula. any way cool story. very creative in the alias for sonny...cough, cough. I liked it anyway. keep up the good work.
great start. this looks like its going to be very interesting. I like Marcy, a figured he was a vampire before you actually mentioned the nocturnal bit from the Count part of his name. I dont know, probably b/c i just read Dracula. any way cool story. very creative in the alias for sonny...cough, cough. I liked it anyway. keep up the good work.