for Bleeding Hearts9/13/2005 c1 Amelia Grant
-whistles- long. yeah...but in a good way. you kept me reading! nice work; it's a great poem
-whistles- long. yeah...but in a good way. you kept me reading! nice work; it's a great poem
8/16/2005 c1 Kyria Asimi
Whoa...*wipes away tear* wouldn't luck have it that this was the first poem of your i clicked on? Amazing poem
Whoa...*wipes away tear* wouldn't luck have it that this was the first poem of your i clicked on? Amazing poem
8/16/2005 c1 
155Shadowed Mind
this is so amazing, beautiful, words can not describe it. this is about the best poem i've ever read. keep strong, and keeop writing, for you are ever so talented. all my love, shadowed mind
155Shadowed Mindthis is so amazing, beautiful, words can not describe it. this is about the best poem i've ever read. keep strong, and keeop writing, for you are ever so talented. all my love, shadowed mind
8/11/2005 c1 18twistedtruths
That was really amazing. You've left me here crying. The poem was written so well and so deep and beautiful. One of your best. I love it.
18twistedtruthsThat was really amazing. You've left me here crying. The poem was written so well and so deep and beautiful. One of your best. I love it.
8/9/2005 c1 emilyrachel
omg your best work yet! i cant believe how much this poem has touched me, how much i can relate to it. i had to read it over 3 times for all the meaning to seep in. truely amazing. the rhyming was magnificent and the metaphors. i cannot fault this peice really we are going to have to have a long chat about this peice!
omg your best work yet! i cant believe how much this poem has touched me, how much i can relate to it. i had to read it over 3 times for all the meaning to seep in. truely amazing. the rhyming was magnificent and the metaphors. i cannot fault this peice really we are going to have to have a long chat about this peice!
8/5/2005 c1 93Venustas iaceo
Holy ... shit. This actually made me *cry*. Just... wow. Hot fucking damn. Definitely one for the favorites.
93Venustas iaceoHoly ... shit. This actually made me *cry*. Just... wow. Hot fucking damn. Definitely one for the favorites.
7/30/2005 c1 73Rozlin
wow... you seriously made me cry with this... it's so beautiful and heartfelt... it's true that no one notices and although part of you wants them to, if they do they only make it worse... can i have this to put on my wall? would you please e-mail it to me? i absolutly love this and for some strange reason can't stop crying...
73Rozlinwow... you seriously made me cry with this... it's so beautiful and heartfelt... it's true that no one notices and although part of you wants them to, if they do they only make it worse... can i have this to put on my wall? would you please e-mail it to me? i absolutly love this and for some strange reason can't stop crying...
7/25/2005 c1 39Alisha Marie
Great job on this! It's very emtional...and dark. Awesome job! Keep up the good work.
39Alisha MarieGreat job on this! It's very emtional...and dark. Awesome job! Keep up the good work.
7/13/2005 c1 hellokittychic31
awesomely written- a beautiful rhythm and flow, and rhyme meter
Very thoughtful of you to post this up, lost of people here would be done good to know they're not alone, taht you kno and have been tehre.. your words are full of understanding- something desperately craved..and i must say that you wrote this in such a way taht the words touches hearts with their truth..
keep writing, i really really like to read your poems, because they mean so much!
muchlUB-kerr
awesomely written- a beautiful rhythm and flow, and rhyme meter
Very thoughtful of you to post this up, lost of people here would be done good to know they're not alone, taht you kno and have been tehre.. your words are full of understanding- something desperately craved..and i must say that you wrote this in such a way taht the words touches hearts with their truth..
keep writing, i really really like to read your poems, because they mean so much!
muchlUB-kerr
7/4/2005 c1 I Found Myself At 24
Deep, dark and beautiful. Great job girl! There were a few lines where the rhyming stumbled a little, but the strength of the poem's content smoothed it over quite easily. Great job, keep up the awesome work!
Deep, dark and beautiful. Great job girl! There were a few lines where the rhyming stumbled a little, but the strength of the poem's content smoothed it over quite easily. Great job, keep up the awesome work!
7/2/2005 c1 Bloodsinger
The way the rhyming scheme changes a little here and there creates and interesting effect. Unfortunately it threw the rhythm off a couple of times, but other than that, this poem is good.
The way the rhyming scheme changes a little here and there creates and interesting effect. Unfortunately it threw the rhythm off a couple of times, but other than that, this poem is good.
7/2/2005 c1 20Queen Isabell of Mars
I love all your work. There's so much passion that I thought I would suffocate. So well written. ;-)Thank you for all your reviews. Keep written chika.
20Queen Isabell of MarsI love all your work. There's so much passion that I thought I would suffocate. So well written. ;-)Thank you for all your reviews. Keep written chika.
7/2/2005 c1 190apromptedpoet
Wow. That was amazing.
The writing was fantastic and even though you didn't rhyme every time it still went with the flow of the poem.
Writing large poems like this can be extremely difficult for some people because even if they try they don't have enough emotion in them to just write something this long out of no where. You tend to get off topic if you really have no passion or emotion for what you're writing.
You can really tell that you were feeling relatively emotional during the period it took for you to write this though.
I don't know. I feel like one of my friends would write this to me, just because if I was in the situation, I would probably be on the recieving end. I don't know who you were relating to when you wrote this, but I just feel that it spoke to many people for many people on this site especially are going through the exact same thing and can relate to what you have written down.
You did a very good job. I don't give compliments every day because I am kind of critical but you did an amazing job and I really have nothing to say.
It WOULD be interesting though, if you tried to turn this into a story. I know you're probably more into poetry, but even if you asked someone just to see how it would turn out. Because in my opinion, it would be a good read if it was done correctly.
Anyways.
Carry on using your writer's gift because not everyone has it!
Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting
P.S. Sorry the review is so long!
190apromptedpoetWow. That was amazing.
The writing was fantastic and even though you didn't rhyme every time it still went with the flow of the poem.
Writing large poems like this can be extremely difficult for some people because even if they try they don't have enough emotion in them to just write something this long out of no where. You tend to get off topic if you really have no passion or emotion for what you're writing.
You can really tell that you were feeling relatively emotional during the period it took for you to write this though.
I don't know. I feel like one of my friends would write this to me, just because if I was in the situation, I would probably be on the recieving end. I don't know who you were relating to when you wrote this, but I just feel that it spoke to many people for many people on this site especially are going through the exact same thing and can relate to what you have written down.
You did a very good job. I don't give compliments every day because I am kind of critical but you did an amazing job and I really have nothing to say.
It WOULD be interesting though, if you tried to turn this into a story. I know you're probably more into poetry, but even if you asked someone just to see how it would turn out. Because in my opinion, it would be a good read if it was done correctly.
Anyways.
Carry on using your writer's gift because not everyone has it!
Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting
P.S. Sorry the review is so long!