for Burnt Not only once but TWICE8/12/2006 c9 Alenor
hmm, ok well i thought you'd at least get them back together at the end. ahh well, cya later.
hmm, ok well i thought you'd at least get them back together at the end. ahh well, cya later.
11/25/2005 c1 K. D. Rayne
I can't remember if you let me read some of this before or not. I don't think you did. Shame on you, MarMar, shame on you. It's starting out like a story Id want to read, even if Im sure it's going to end with "Oh,*gasp* I love you too!" ^_^
I can't remember if you let me read some of this before or not. I don't think you did. Shame on you, MarMar, shame on you. It's starting out like a story Id want to read, even if Im sure it's going to end with "Oh,*gasp* I love you too!" ^_^
7/15/2005 c9 
1storywritergirl
Sorry, I didn't review for the other chapters. That story was so sad :'(good work, but really sad. Anyway thanks again for reviewing my story. Toodles,
storywritergirl xoxo
1storywritergirlSorry, I didn't review for the other chapters. That story was so sad :'(good work, but really sad. Anyway thanks again for reviewing my story. Toodles,
storywritergirl xoxo
7/10/2005 c9 alyssa
wow, both of those guys were jerks. i'm glad this was the ending. good job!
wow, both of those guys were jerks. i'm glad this was the ending. good job!
7/10/2005 c1 5prescott
haha i like the tension between them. lol reminds me of aaron carter, cuz he has a twin sister named angel. wow i don't even know how i remember that.anyway, had fun reading the first chapter thanks :)
love
5prescotthaha i like the tension between them. lol reminds me of aaron carter, cuz he has a twin sister named angel. wow i don't even know how i remember that.anyway, had fun reading the first chapter thanks :)
love
7/10/2005 c9 1BetweenLife
omg..its so sad..the matt do is a jerk and i cant believe she actually left aaron..goddess..i was crying...
1BetweenLifeomg..its so sad..the matt do is a jerk and i cant believe she actually left aaron..goddess..i was crying...
7/7/2005 c9 pianogal
i'm usually a romantic at heart so i would usually have wanted this to end with her being with a guy. but i don't think either guy deserved her so i'm glad you ended it this way and i loved that final sentence about getting two things: her daughter and her job. that was great. awesome story and i love "Life, Love, and Growing Up" too so you better update that soon.
Kim
i'm usually a romantic at heart so i would usually have wanted this to end with her being with a guy. but i don't think either guy deserved her so i'm glad you ended it this way and i loved that final sentence about getting two things: her daughter and her job. that was great. awesome story and i love "Life, Love, and Growing Up" too so you better update that soon.
Kim
7/7/2005 c9 lilsakura
Good ending. Not the typical fluff (which is good (= ) but still a happy ending
Good ending. Not the typical fluff (which is good (= ) but still a happy ending
7/7/2005 c9 jesse05
oh well that was just great...NOT! you so ruined it, like totally made it suck!
oh well that was just great...NOT! you so ruined it, like totally made it suck!
7/7/2005 c8 pianogal
awe, that chapter was so cute. but i have a feeling the next chapter may be a little different. its just a feeling but anyways i'm so happy she moved on with her life. at the beginning i hated Aaron, then he grew on me, and then i hated him again. good writing and i can't believe there is only one more chapter. i can't wait.
Kim
awe, that chapter was so cute. but i have a feeling the next chapter may be a little different. its just a feeling but anyways i'm so happy she moved on with her life. at the beginning i hated Aaron, then he grew on me, and then i hated him again. good writing and i can't believe there is only one more chapter. i can't wait.
Kim