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8/24/2005 c1 Charity F
sad...=(
8/21/2005 c1 24Moonjava
Very tragic. Especially at the end but i do like it though.
8/18/2005 c1 125Lady Hoshi
Nice, you put everything together like a puzzle. Don't think I could ever write that short, takes talent, well written.
8/18/2005 c1 PunkLycan
wow, I can completely relate to this poem.
8/17/2005 c1 8Unknown Unnamed
Wow. That's so sad. It was amazing.
8/4/2005 c1 14zuvalupa
This caused me to shiver! Good job!
8/4/2005 c1 16Noir Fleurir
okay this one just creeped me out but it was still by far one of the greater works you've written:)
8/4/2005 c1 26ThatGirlInBlack
After reading this I was suddenly reminded of the many times my heart has been broken and will be broken. You have a talent for bringing out emotions in your poems they are always so strong. I haven't known of too many poeple who can write Haiku's as well as you do. Great job!
8/3/2005 c1 44RomeoandJuliet
It seems only truth comes from your writing.

~Sean~ps. Thank you very much for you review.
7/29/2005 c1 183writerforever
Short but powerful. I like it!
7/25/2005 c1 110KonekOniko
sad, sweet, and oh-so-true. emotions are painful, but they are what make us human...wonderful poem, hope to see more ^-^
7/21/2005 c1 4ShinkeiRyu
Beatutiful...yay!
6/30/2005 c1 account not in use
Eek. Emotion pours out of it, even though it's short...I love the word choices.
6/30/2005 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
Powerful expression of sadness.
6/30/2005 c1 5Eagle Seance
a good metaphor. i don't know if it's intended, but the first two lines have a weirdly onomatopoieic feel to it... hm. nice.
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