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4/4/2008 c1 xbluxmoonx
wow. i liked this so much. it was very descriptive and the fantasy in it was wonderful. awesome job.
1/20/2006 c1 20Pheobe Meryll
I loved the descriptives in this, I could see the entire thing unfolding in my mind. I love mermaids and you definately did them justice. :) The only critique I have is that the meter is inconsistant; I don't know if that really matters in blank verse, though...so disregard the comment if it doesn't apply. Keep writing.
8/28/2005 c1 16Islandbreeze
I loved the images that I got from your wording and this was written beautifully, I don't know too much about poetry but I enjoyed reading this! I love mermaids too...I was thinking about doing a story...but time goes, and *shudders* school starts tomorrow for me! Anyway, very lovely poem!:)
7/18/2005 c1 1Angelbmo
really good...keep it up ^^
7/5/2005 c1 3Lady Isaiah
This is so beautiful...I love it lots!
7/1/2005 c1 21Lilon Pergus
Very nice. I especially like this stanza:

"They take my handsI leave the sandsI will never returnTo these lands".

All in all, very good poetry. Post some more!

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