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10/2/2005 c1 26Elizabeth Ebony
the wild hearted girl.

i can relate-its wonderful.
9/1/2005 c1 132mizu no kokoro
wah, dep and powerful, such few words with such great impact~

keep writing!
8/24/2005 c1 Charity F
lovely
8/18/2005 c1 PunkLycan
SO TRUE! OMG.. I think this is my favourite poem of all time!
8/11/2005 c1 38CarpeDiem28
Another simple, but powerful haiku, I like it.
8/10/2005 c1 19Tears-for-Mary
powerful.
8/5/2005 c1 3carved-in-shadows
oh, I love it, very simple and sad
8/4/2005 c1 14zuvalupa
You're able to capture so many wonderful and amazing things in so few words! You're a wonderful writer!
8/4/2005 c1 16Noir Fleurir
very powerful words great haiku once again:)
8/4/2005 c1 26ThatGirlInBlack
wow this is so powerful the words bring out such emotion. Great job!
8/2/2005 c1 31MeAgain5tMe
Story of our lives. Reach a certain point and we can never turn back. Nice work, you have a way of packing a lot into a little.
7/29/2005 c1 flamyrre
wow, this is really good! you know, this topic always depresses me, and your short lines, power-charged vocab really captured the essence of what I feel when I think about the inevitablity of teh death of innocence.

A job well done!
7/25/2005 c1 110KonekOniko
Oh, wow...this was powerful for something so short. Sad, but touching. I love it...great job, ^-^
7/20/2005 c1 4ShinkeiRyu
Beautiful...I get^^
7/6/2005 c1 87youzi
very apt, focused piece. do keep writing !
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