for The Council1/12/2008 c1 
4MacKitty
i really like the first verse and the last three verses. (isn't that practically the whole poem? haha) especially the last three verses. i just like the imagery in the first verse; i can totally picture it. i feel really bad for her...anyway, see ya!
4MacKittyi really like the first verse and the last three verses. (isn't that practically the whole poem? haha) especially the last three verses. i just like the imagery in the first verse; i can totally picture it. i feel really bad for her...anyway, see ya!
12/18/2005 c1 Something Uncertain
Wow, this is really good. I like what it's about a lot and you phrase it beautifully.
Wow, this is really good. I like what it's about a lot and you phrase it beautifully.
7/30/2005 c1 16Islandbreeze
This is cool, like a story poem. I like the descriptions in this, all the words form a lovely image for everything you wanted to say.
16IslandbreezeThis is cool, like a story poem. I like the descriptions in this, all the words form a lovely image for everything you wanted to say.
7/26/2005 c1 132mizu no kokoro
wow, i loved the finish, graet imapact there~~ Good work
keep writing!
132mizu no kokorowow, i loved the finish, graet imapact there~~ Good work
keep writing!
7/15/2005 c1 5bluewaves64
Nice poem! you managed to put a story into a poem, and i thought it was well written. :)
5bluewaves64Nice poem! you managed to put a story into a poem, and i thought it was well written. :)
7/15/2005 c1 Ether Boy
tis very cool i wish i could write a story like that but i can't only good at short form songs really. awesome anyway.
tis very cool i wish i could write a story like that but i can't only good at short form songs really. awesome anyway.
7/2/2005 c1 Larwen Sparrow
Aww...Yu sent me thid to read, but it wasnt finishedI was impressed then, even more so now.=) I wuv yur poetry.=) I wuv wu.
*huggles*
x
Aww...Yu sent me thid to read, but it wasnt finishedI was impressed then, even more so now.=) I wuv yur poetry.=) I wuv wu.
*huggles*
x
7/2/2005 c1 8gossamerdragon
still reminds me of black magician triology, but I still love it none the less. I think you should write a back story... jsut so I can know her crimes and what happened...*shrugs* I think it rocks anyways.. I love story poems *skips off*
8gossamerdragonstill reminds me of black magician triology, but I still love it none the less. I think you should write a back story... jsut so I can know her crimes and what happened...*shrugs* I think it rocks anyways.. I love story poems *skips off*