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11/16/2008 c1 22GjK
Very interesting. I like the images in the poem alot. Very nice!
1/12/2008 c1 4MacKitty
i really like the first verse and the last three verses. (isn't that practically the whole poem? haha) especially the last three verses. i just like the imagery in the first verse; i can totally picture it. i feel really bad for her...anyway, see ya!
12/18/2005 c1 Something Uncertain
Wow, this is really good. I like what it's about a lot and you phrase it beautifully.
7/30/2005 c1 16Islandbreeze
This is cool, like a story poem. I like the descriptions in this, all the words form a lovely image for everything you wanted to say.
7/26/2005 c1 132mizu no kokoro
wow, i loved the finish, graet imapact there~~ Good work

keep writing!
7/15/2005 c1 5bluewaves64
Nice poem! you managed to put a story into a poem, and i thought it was well written. :)
7/15/2005 c1 Ether Boy
tis very cool i wish i could write a story like that but i can't only good at short form songs really. awesome anyway.
7/2/2005 c1 Larwen Sparrow
Aww...Yu sent me thid to read, but it wasnt finishedI was impressed then, even more so now.=) I wuv yur poetry.=) I wuv wu.


7/2/2005 c1 8gossamerdragon
still reminds me of black magician triology, but I still love it none the less. I think you should write a back story... jsut so I can know her crimes and what happened...*shrugs* I think it rocks anyways.. I love story poems *skips off*
7/2/2005 c1 1Madcow13
Nice. I don't usually read poetry but I enjoyed this immensely. It could have included more about her "crime" but it still works the way it is. We don't what she did but only she is innocent... They think they know what she did... They are wrong...

So, excellent work!

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