4/11/2006 c30 4Your Anti-Drug
So I almost started bawling my eyes out when I was reading the epilogue because you ended so well. SO FREAKING WELL. oh man. I loved this story, and I got so into it. I'm kinda depressed.
So I almost started bawling my eyes out when I was reading the epilogue because you ended so well. SO FREAKING WELL. oh man. I loved this story, and I got so into it. I'm kinda depressed.
4/11/2006 c30 Kjersti
Nice epilogue/chapter. A good closure. Love this story. Good work. :)
Nice epilogue/chapter. A good closure. Love this story. Good work. :)
4/10/2006 c30 7lilxseeker
oh wowers! i cant believe its actually over...i love this story! kudos! great job!
oh wowers! i cant believe its actually over...i love this story! kudos! great job!
4/10/2006 c30 1BrownEyedBeauty
NICEST STORY EVER! I was just left wondering about one thing...what happened to the BIG prank that Shelley was gonna playon Brandon? and what was that prank? I never really figured it out. Sorry if you mentioned it and I missed it. I'm forgetful like that.
Otherwise, this is an awesome story. So sad that it's done. Good luck with future work!
NICEST STORY EVER! I was just left wondering about one thing...what happened to the BIG prank that Shelley was gonna playon Brandon? and what was that prank? I never really figured it out. Sorry if you mentioned it and I missed it. I'm forgetful like that.
Otherwise, this is an awesome story. So sad that it's done. Good luck with future work!
4/10/2006 c30 5peachfruitsalad
this has been one of the best stories I've read on FP. I look forward to reading more from you - well done! keep it up.
this has been one of the best stories I've read on FP. I look forward to reading more from you - well done! keep it up.
4/10/2006 c30 2KnotFamous
Wow. That's all I can say. It sucks that it's over but it's great how everything just sort of falls together.
Good for Brandon. USC is the best, beats Texas anyday. Fight on!
Good story. I'm happy you didn't give this one up. It's def. one of my favorites on this site.
Wow. That's all I can say. It sucks that it's over but it's great how everything just sort of falls together.
Good for Brandon. USC is the best, beats Texas anyday. Fight on!
Good story. I'm happy you didn't give this one up. It's def. one of my favorites on this site.
4/10/2006 c30 17Susurrent Threnody
That was one great ending. It wrapps everything up, letting you imagine what will happen later. Absoutely wonderful.
That was one great ending. It wrapps everything up, letting you imagine what will happen later. Absoutely wonderful.
4/10/2006 c30 3florissant
HAH FIRST REVIEWER FOR YOUR LAST CHAPTER! well, what do i have to say? it was ADORABLE! just your perfect ending to your perfect chick flick, even though its kinda sad that they'll be parting, you still give me that one last hope that maybe in the future, they'll meet up again and marry and then live happily ever after! it's so cute! i love your story and i'm definitely going to read more of your writing.
HAH FIRST REVIEWER FOR YOUR LAST CHAPTER! well, what do i have to say? it was ADORABLE! just your perfect ending to your perfect chick flick, even though its kinda sad that they'll be parting, you still give me that one last hope that maybe in the future, they'll meet up again and marry and then live happily ever after! it's so cute! i love your story and i'm definitely going to read more of your writing.
4/2/2006 c29 14Grape
Wow! This is a really cute story! I sure hope that the next chapter is posted soon. Great job!
Wow! This is a really cute story! I sure hope that the next chapter is posted soon. Great job!
3/26/2006 c29 10giRLAddiCted
Oh My GOD! I am so glad I read this! It's is effing awesome girl! The main characters are...well...exquisite! I mean...Shelley is a cheerleader but she still loves the game she only cheers for...enough to coach them and win the games! But there was the part where she was doing the first pep talk? That was kind of a stretch but what the hey! I loved it! I love the whole story and the whole concept. Brandon is a total jerk until he realized how much he likes Shelley and Shelley herself is a beauty in and out! Love her completely. And Zach? Wonderful character! The Team BS...oh they're hilarious! ^.^ Keep it up!
Oh My GOD! I am so glad I read this! It's is effing awesome girl! The main characters are...well...exquisite! I mean...Shelley is a cheerleader but she still loves the game she only cheers for...enough to coach them and win the games! But there was the part where she was doing the first pep talk? That was kind of a stretch but what the hey! I loved it! I love the whole story and the whole concept. Brandon is a total jerk until he realized how much he likes Shelley and Shelley herself is a beauty in and out! Love her completely. And Zach? Wonderful character! The Team BS...oh they're hilarious! ^.^ Keep it up!
3/26/2006 c1 Hotroxygurl
Wow! This is such a cute story... i couldnt stop reading it once i started...even though there were 29 chaoters! shelley and brandon are adorable...how many chapters are left? i hope they get together finally in the end becuz then this wouldnt be the cliche story i know it is and luv it for it!anyways keep up the fantastic work!
Wow! This is such a cute story... i couldnt stop reading it once i started...even though there were 29 chaoters! shelley and brandon are adorable...how many chapters are left? i hope they get together finally in the end becuz then this wouldnt be the cliche story i know it is and luv it for it!anyways keep up the fantastic work!