for For the Love of the Game12/22/2005 c25 
4a24HourSmile
OMG!
Nice job, tossing in some cutie to shake up their emotions!
And if I'm not mistaken, Shelley is definitely starting to think that there's a catch. The only thing is...ill Brandon's motives remain the same?
I BELIEVE IN A THING CALLED LOVE! THE LOVE OF BRANDON AND SHELLEY SHALL ENDURE!
Yeah. That was my sappy moment!
But terrific chapter (as always!). I even found some moments where I was actually "LOL"ing. Like really. I was LAUUGGING OUT LOUUD! lol.
Yeah, sorry that this is a crappy review. But update soon!
4a24HourSmileOMG!
Nice job, tossing in some cutie to shake up their emotions!
And if I'm not mistaken, Shelley is definitely starting to think that there's a catch. The only thing is...ill Brandon's motives remain the same?
I BELIEVE IN A THING CALLED LOVE! THE LOVE OF BRANDON AND SHELLEY SHALL ENDURE!
Yeah. That was my sappy moment!
But terrific chapter (as always!). I even found some moments where I was actually "LOL"ing. Like really. I was LAUUGGING OUT LOUUD! lol.
Yeah, sorry that this is a crappy review. But update soon!
12/13/2005 c24 17Nocturnal silhouette
Even though I haven't reviewed the last two chapters, I'm still quite into this story. I think it's brilliant, especially this last chapter. I like the fact she's not nose-diving into kissing him so early on. He's been after her the majority of this story, so you eluding the kiss, not allowing her to give in so quickly fits perfectly. Plus it makes Brandon work a bit harder in order to get her, which means since he spent on that energy on getting her, he won't lose her like he does other girls, according to other chapters that is. I love this plot. I love this story. I think it's brilliant.
17Nocturnal silhouetteEven though I haven't reviewed the last two chapters, I'm still quite into this story. I think it's brilliant, especially this last chapter. I like the fact she's not nose-diving into kissing him so early on. He's been after her the majority of this story, so you eluding the kiss, not allowing her to give in so quickly fits perfectly. Plus it makes Brandon work a bit harder in order to get her, which means since he spent on that energy on getting her, he won't lose her like he does other girls, according to other chapters that is. I love this plot. I love this story. I think it's brilliant.
12/12/2005 c24 1Shez
love your story, can we have more training scences and is Zack coming into the story nytime soon coz hed be good competition for brandon
1Shezlove your story, can we have more training scences and is Zack coming into the story nytime soon coz hed be good competition for brandon
12/12/2005 c24 MONkeyIsCAlling
WOW nice chapter =)
thanks for the update!
brandon is being such a gentleman...and shelley is being...shelley..haha...
i really like her character..i really liked this chapter actually...
thanks again..hope you update again soon!
just a quick question...how long are you planning on having this story? as in how many chapters?
WOW nice chapter =)
thanks for the update!
brandon is being such a gentleman...and shelley is being...shelley..haha...
i really like her character..i really liked this chapter actually...
thanks again..hope you update again soon!
just a quick question...how long are you planning on having this story? as in how many chapters?
12/11/2005 c24 4a24HourSmile
That was stupendous!
No, the lack of football doesn't bother me at all. lol.
Haha. She should take her dad to the BSB concert! hahahaha. That'd be GREAT. ESPECIALLY if Brandon's gonna be hiding in teh bushes!
But no, this chapter was A+! I loved the old people bit! haha. Shelley is just Little Miss Everything! haha.
And well, the whole eluding to a possible kiss is pretty cute. lol. So who knows...!
Update sooper soon! haha.
4a24HourSmileThat was stupendous!
No, the lack of football doesn't bother me at all. lol.
Haha. She should take her dad to the BSB concert! hahahaha. That'd be GREAT. ESPECIALLY if Brandon's gonna be hiding in teh bushes!
But no, this chapter was A+! I loved the old people bit! haha. Shelley is just Little Miss Everything! haha.
And well, the whole eluding to a possible kiss is pretty cute. lol. So who knows...!
Update sooper soon! haha.
12/10/2005 c24 1psychedelic mishap
i know brandon's dioing it for his pride..but he does like shelley, riht? hm. i'm stating to get confused. ah well, that was a great chapter1 like the whole parents hate each other thing. =D update again - mwa!
1psychedelic mishapi know brandon's dioing it for his pride..but he does like shelley, riht? hm. i'm stating to get confused. ah well, that was a great chapter1 like the whole parents hate each other thing. =D update again - mwa!
12/10/2005 c24 2city-gal7
ur story is so cool! and ouch to Brandon, not so big gentils? lol, i kept laughing. But Shelley is really cool, she's my fave! next to the BS club of course ;)...they're the best! Chelsey, argh, i hate her! god, desperate much? ok, enoguh...keep writing!
2city-gal7ur story is so cool! and ouch to Brandon, not so big gentils? lol, i kept laughing. But Shelley is really cool, she's my fave! next to the BS club of course ;)...they're the best! Chelsey, argh, i hate her! god, desperate much? ok, enoguh...keep writing!
12/10/2005 c24 lilcrazy.mwauh.3
and so.. i scroll down to go press the next-chapter arrow. .. there is no arrow.
WHAT? im sorry.. but this is really good.. and i want you to finish it.. cause i wanna read it and find out what happens.. so.. por favor, update! =] heh. okay.. so maybe you dont have to, but it would be most appreciated.. gahh.. .. ill shut up now.
but this is .. really good. really.
and so.. i scroll down to go press the next-chapter arrow. .. there is no arrow.
WHAT? im sorry.. but this is really good.. and i want you to finish it.. cause i wanna read it and find out what happens.. so.. por favor, update! =] heh. okay.. so maybe you dont have to, but it would be most appreciated.. gahh.. .. ill shut up now.
but this is .. really good. really.