for For the Love of the Game8/11/2009 c30 rddekker
this story is worth reading! it's so great! XD I learned a lot of bad words, though. HAHA!
this story is worth reading! it's so great! XD I learned a lot of bad words, though. HAHA!
7/12/2009 c30 
3Floppy125
aw! I loved the story! it was great! at first i wasnt sure to read it because i have no knowledge in football, but i'm glad i've read it! i loved these lines:
"Cue the ‘Hallelujah’ chorus. Throw confetti. Jump for joy. Dance like no one’s watching. Shout as if you’re the happiest person on earth. Bust out some glowsticks and have a rave right where you are right now.
It’s about fucking time."
GREAT STORY ♥
3Floppy125aw! I loved the story! it was great! at first i wasnt sure to read it because i have no knowledge in football, but i'm glad i've read it! i loved these lines:
"Cue the ‘Hallelujah’ chorus. Throw confetti. Jump for joy. Dance like no one’s watching. Shout as if you’re the happiest person on earth. Bust out some glowsticks and have a rave right where you are right now.
It’s about fucking time."
GREAT STORY ♥
7/11/2009 c30 LittlemissPatty
ah! how i love witty heroines and a cocky prince charming. Such a sweet story. It reminded me of another FP story though it revolves mostly on basketball. the ending is sweet and realistic.
Who knew Brandon Millers can be fucking sappy? :)) He may be an ass most of the time but he's just great and i love him to bits. Never saw any of his acts coming. specially the confessing part. ah. young love
Shelley Sinclair, i have to say is awesome. Cool witty retorts and such. :)) I love how she loves football and placed everything on the line for something she oh so desperately happened. The ending was a tear-jerker so is the part where she gives off a speech. inspiring. really?
Whatever happened to Taryn and Morgan and Destiny? They vanished towards the end. Team BS were also incognito. It's like they weren't there but just mentioned. I wonder whose coming with Shelley to NYU and whose coming with Brandon to USC.
Even though Zachary played a small role, i like him. :) AND Kyle. oh kyle. :)) those cousins.
The rest of the team were also cool. Johnny and his-or as Brandon puts it- "fagness" is cute. Alex. well i feel like there's more to him. James, well, i don't know him really besides him being quiet on their first date and receiving the "nail" award.
All in all this was a fun and funny story. I love the Humor and Romance. Cliched as it is, it's still cute. Most of the stories are cliched but just do a twist here and there and bam! An epic story. Great job. Though this was done like 3 years ago, it's still timeless. :)
ah! how i love witty heroines and a cocky prince charming. Such a sweet story. It reminded me of another FP story though it revolves mostly on basketball. the ending is sweet and realistic.
Who knew Brandon Millers can be fucking sappy? :)) He may be an ass most of the time but he's just great and i love him to bits. Never saw any of his acts coming. specially the confessing part. ah. young love
Shelley Sinclair, i have to say is awesome. Cool witty retorts and such. :)) I love how she loves football and placed everything on the line for something she oh so desperately happened. The ending was a tear-jerker so is the part where she gives off a speech. inspiring. really?
Whatever happened to Taryn and Morgan and Destiny? They vanished towards the end. Team BS were also incognito. It's like they weren't there but just mentioned. I wonder whose coming with Shelley to NYU and whose coming with Brandon to USC.
Even though Zachary played a small role, i like him. :) AND Kyle. oh kyle. :)) those cousins.
The rest of the team were also cool. Johnny and his-or as Brandon puts it- "fagness" is cute. Alex. well i feel like there's more to him. James, well, i don't know him really besides him being quiet on their first date and receiving the "nail" award.
All in all this was a fun and funny story. I love the Humor and Romance. Cliched as it is, it's still cute. Most of the stories are cliched but just do a twist here and there and bam! An epic story. Great job. Though this was done like 3 years ago, it's still timeless. :)
6/23/2009 c30 24Amethystars
Great story.Enough laughs to keep it light, and enough drama/romance to keep me hooked. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff!
24AmethystarsGreat story.Enough laughs to keep it light, and enough drama/romance to keep me hooked. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff!
6/22/2009 c12 Amethystars
Loving the story so far. Shelley and Brandon are so funny. Can't wait to read more... stupid early mornings :)
Loving the story so far. Shelley and Brandon are so funny. Can't wait to read more... stupid early mornings :)
6/17/2009 c6 Amethystars
ooh... I like this story. Interesting premise, the coaching thing. It's bedtime now :( but I can't wait to read more tomorrow!
ooh... I like this story. Interesting premise, the coaching thing. It's bedtime now :( but I can't wait to read more tomorrow!
6/15/2009 c30 ghurl00
OMG! i lavv the story! it's so good:))
"worth the wait"
just the girl is so the right song!:)
great job!:))
OMG! i lavv the story! it's so good:))
"worth the wait"
just the girl is so the right song!:)
great job!:))
5/17/2009 c30 DreamBee4
This story was wonderful. There was never a dull moment, which kept me reading! I am so a member of Team BS! :)
This story was wonderful. There was never a dull moment, which kept me reading! I am so a member of Team BS! :)