for For the Love of the Game5/10/2008 c22 Brittany
don't worry the kids in my town call football pop warner too-that and pick up football.
don't worry the kids in my town call football pop warner too-that and pick up football.
4/28/2008 c30 xLittleBlackConverse
I love Shelly. And even though i thought Brendan was a little too cocky i loved him too. Atleast in the last chapter =]
I liked how you didnt make Shelley freak out about the whole Chelsey blackmail thing. I was expecting a pretty bad heartbroken realization thing there. Anyway. I'm off to read your sequel now!
xx
I love Shelly. And even though i thought Brendan was a little too cocky i loved him too. Atleast in the last chapter =]
I liked how you didnt make Shelley freak out about the whole Chelsey blackmail thing. I was expecting a pretty bad heartbroken realization thing there. Anyway. I'm off to read your sequel now!
xx
4/22/2008 c13 kristina
THIS IS SO AWESOME AND SWEET! YOU SHOULD MAKE IT INTO A REAL BOOK I LOVE IT , ITS ROMANTIC AND SWEET HA HA AND FUNNY =]
THIS IS SO AWESOME AND SWEET! YOU SHOULD MAKE IT INTO A REAL BOOK I LOVE IT , ITS ROMANTIC AND SWEET HA HA AND FUNNY =]
4/22/2008 c30 ihateyou
this is so horrible! omg! i could barely finish it my friend made me read it! SO CORNY! yeah get real if ur thinking this will get turned into a movie keep dreaming ! seriously its like legit horrible!
this is so horrible! omg! i could barely finish it my friend made me read it! SO CORNY! yeah get real if ur thinking this will get turned into a movie keep dreaming ! seriously its like legit horrible!
4/22/2008 c3 Kristina
i haven't read it ALL yet but so far its something disney channel would write, its corny and sketchy i mean seriously
i haven't read it ALL yet but so far its something disney channel would write, its corny and sketchy i mean seriously
3/12/2008 c1 Carved in Ice
Great story. Love the characters...very believable. Keep up the great work!
Great story. Love the characters...very believable. Keep up the great work!
3/4/2008 c30 
5HelloLovely
Hey! I just wanted to say that I love love love this story like no other! I can't wait to read more of your works!
Love,
Becca
p.s. In Latin nemo means nobody. = b
5HelloLovelyHey! I just wanted to say that I love love love this story like no other! I can't wait to read more of your works!
Love,
Becca
p.s. In Latin nemo means nobody. = b
2/5/2008 c30 Genato
i thin it ended too abruptly. but other than that, i have no qualms. a good fic. keep on writing!
i thin it ended too abruptly. but other than that, i have no qualms. a good fic. keep on writing!
1/5/2008 c30 JZK
I love this story
Its sweet what Brandon says at the end
so she knew all along - there was one point when she said something i thought she knew but then kinda got rid of the thought
so it was unexpected
lol
cant wait for the sequel
I love this story
Its sweet what Brandon says at the end
so she knew all along - there was one point when she said something i thought she knew but then kinda got rid of the thought
so it was unexpected
lol
cant wait for the sequel
12/6/2007 c30 EdwardDazzlesMe
Great story! I'm glad I took the time to read it. :) It was well written and believable.
God has blessed you with a great talent, and it should be shared with the world! :)
Keep it up!
EdwardDazzlesMe
Great story! I'm glad I took the time to read it. :) It was well written and believable.
God has blessed you with a great talent, and it should be shared with the world! :)
Keep it up!
EdwardDazzlesMe
10/19/2007 c30 bridgette261
This was really cute :) Nice job done. Also, I'd like to point out something. Brandon's initials spell out "BAM!" :D
-Katherine
This was really cute :) Nice job done. Also, I'd like to point out something. Brandon's initials spell out "BAM!" :D
-Katherine