12/30/2006 c20 Chiara
Hey, I really like your story, and I know it's done already and you're probably never going to go back to change it, but a few tips if you write any other stories. Please, please, please, proof read your stories a couple times at LEAST before you post a chapter, and a beta-reader would be a really good idea. There was one line in the last chapter where you used the word "eyes" twice in the same sentence and it didn't make much sense. Furthermore the whole story is getting a lot sloppier as you go along, the only reason I've kept on is for the plot, but your writing is starting to get on my nerves. It was much better in the beginning. Lastly, your author's note at the end of this chapter said "Are you confused? I had to read it twice before everything seemed to make sense to me." If you, the AUTHOR, are confused by your story, then MAYBE, just maybe, you should revise it, because you of all people should know what's going on. The reader shouldn't have to read it twice to understand the basic plot.

I really like the idea, though, and I really admire Shelley for not caving to Brandon. I do hope they get together in the end, but I hope it isn't because she's gotten really stupid about it.

12/19/2006 c2 wh00t
yay

12/2/2006 c30 4fazzingaway
i just spent the whole day reading this story and it was beautiful. i instantly fell in love with shelley when i first read her and i loved how original this story was! your style was brilliant and everything developed really nicely. as for brandon and shelley, i particularly loved how real the development of their relationship was. there was some kooky random moments but i found myself thinking how true they were to real life. and even the end wasn't a disgustingly sweet happy ending but it was a realistic one filled with hope which i felt made the ending sweeter than any mushy scene could have.

this story is truly a work of art and i absolutely loved reading it. you did a fantastic job!

11/23/2006 c30 3AJS
Oh my god... I love this fic. I spent all of Thanksgiving reading this and omg omg omg, it's amazing :) I don't know. It's just so hilarious and meaningful and amazing all at once that I'm having a hard time gathering all of my thoughts to sit here and write you a decent reply.

I liked the ending a lot, and it seemed REALLY suitable, even though the confrontation with Chelsey seemed a bit rushed and confusing... like I guess we were missing that extra interaction between Brandon & Shelley before it happened. But that's okay because your explanation at the end of the chapter pretty much explained it well.

I don't know. I just feel so satisfied after reading this. Like... I got this thrill throughout the whole story and the game omg and when they won I just wanted to jump up and scream in excitement too... and I guess I just FEEL like even though I only started reading this today I feel like it's been a long time since they first met and that Brandon & Shelley have advanced so much to get this far and it just seems so... RIGHT. Haha I don't even know T_T It feels so surreal or something.

Team BS is HILARIOUS. When Megan got up there for the first meeting I seriously just laughed out loud and thought, "OH MY GOD IS THIS FOREAL!" And I seriously just can't count how many times I caught myself grinning like an idiot or laughing out loud because of this story.

I seriously love it :D You're an awesome writer and as I said before, this is a sincerely AMAZING story. I'm so glad that I read it and my only regret is that I didn't find it sooner :) Keep up the good work. I think I'll check out your sequel for Megan when it advances a little further (I usually like to read stories all in one shot). You're insanely talented :)

- Alyssa

10/21/2006 c1 1supergal
OH MY GOSH!

Hahaha x) See, I started reading this story a lonng while back and then I lost it. And then I was reading someone else's story and I saw that you commented it and I clicked on to your profile and guess what, you're the author of For the Love of the Game!

YIPPE!

9/16/2006 c1 2StrawberryStarburst
I like it when the story starts with a short chapter-it get right to the point. You achieved that perfectly. I can't wait to read the rest.

8/18/2006 c30 7dreamgirl89
Hello.

I found a link to this story under one of my friend's favorite stories list, so I thought I'd give it a read.

I really liked it, and I liked how it turned out. I'm kind of sad that it ended, though. I would have liked to see where their relationship goes.

7/15/2006 c2 your harbor
Well, this story is definitely different than I expected. Congrats on making it better than I judged it to be. I can't wait for the next chapter. =)