for Nature7/3/2005 c1 
6MrFlames
I never know really what to say about Haiku. They're so defined by structure and usually so focused that it's hard to argue. But you title the poem "Nature" which is an abstract idea, and end with "That's nature's beauty." I don't really agree that the preceding lines can fully justify a sort of conclusion like that. Why love clear water if only to see the rock beneath?
6MrFlamesI never know really what to say about Haiku. They're so defined by structure and usually so focused that it's hard to argue. But you title the poem "Nature" which is an abstract idea, and end with "That's nature's beauty." I don't really agree that the preceding lines can fully justify a sort of conclusion like that. Why love clear water if only to see the rock beneath?