for Sacred Night11/8/2007 c1 
14Carrollesque
If you just made me read a Mary Sue, I swear to God Almighty I will slit my wrists and end it all right now.
Seriously.
Anyway, well written, beautiful imagery, but just a bit sappy.
Keep it up.
14CarrollesqueIf you just made me read a Mary Sue, I swear to God Almighty I will slit my wrists and end it all right now.
Seriously.
Anyway, well written, beautiful imagery, but just a bit sappy.
Keep it up.
4/2/2006 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
Aw, that's incredibly cute. I love the ending. Great job. Keep writing! :)
871no.peace.los.angelesAw, that's incredibly cute. I love the ending. Great job. Keep writing! :)
10/28/2005 c1 1kaycar11
Aw...ti's very romantic. It's cute and she seems very happy about how the marriage. It's life-like.
1kaycar11Aw...ti's very romantic. It's cute and she seems very happy about how the marriage. It's life-like.
7/4/2005 c1 skippy101
WOW! i got goosebumps. that was one of the deepest pieces i've ever read.
WOW! i got goosebumps. that was one of the deepest pieces i've ever read.