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7/25/2005 c1 59wilderness
wow. you have got tons of talent girl. I like the darkness of each of your poems (the ones I have read) and I love the language and working you use. Well done!lani
7/4/2005 c1 80citrus scented
oh tragic and depressing, very emotional. it seems heartfelt and is very moving to read, nice flow to it aswell- the rythmes dont seem forced at all.
7/4/2005 c1 gold against the soul
Oh! Melodramatic stuff! I like the bitterness, the strong words, the colours that one percieves from these words. The whole poem bursts with a dark richness. Lovely. :)
7/4/2005 c1 234The Moribund Marionette
Interesting...one comment, however: In the second line in the last verse, "looses" should be "loses". Otherwise, it's nice. ~Writer of Darkness~

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