for I Miss You Dad11/28/2005 c1 
19Astana
I'm so sorry about what happened. It must be really hard and I appreciate it the more for sharing it with us. Keep writing, don't lose your faith in your talent.
19AstanaI'm so sorry about what happened. It must be really hard and I appreciate it the more for sharing it with us. Keep writing, don't lose your faith in your talent.
7/8/2005 c1 174marshbar960
i can definitely feel your angst and heartache here but he's smiling down upon you now. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
174marshbar960i can definitely feel your angst and heartache here but he's smiling down upon you now. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
7/4/2005 c1 6Broken Telephone
Aw how sad! I got a tear in my eye as I was reading this. I can't imagine how horrible that must have been. I'm not even going to compare that feeling to anything. This was a fabulous and well written poem. It was written with a lot of emotion and that's what makes it so good! Great job!
6Broken TelephoneAw how sad! I got a tear in my eye as I was reading this. I can't imagine how horrible that must have been. I'm not even going to compare that feeling to anything. This was a fabulous and well written poem. It was written with a lot of emotion and that's what makes it so good! Great job!
7/4/2005 c1 2KereiKitsune
*starts crying* My friend lost her dad alomst a year ago and shes the same age as you and it was so sudden...it just sounds so much like what happened to her... It made me cry... I'm sorry.. *hugs*
2KereiKitsune*starts crying* My friend lost her dad alomst a year ago and shes the same age as you and it was so sudden...it just sounds so much like what happened to her... It made me cry... I'm sorry.. *hugs*