for Twilight5/21/2006 c1 
42Emmytastic gal
whoa... this is incredible! I LOVE it, gorgeous. I've had thoughts like this on more than one occasion. I love the flow and rhyme scheme, its wonderful. "Holding your hand I stare into your face" my favorite line. Presents a picture so believable. Anyways keep it up & write on,
-Em
42Emmytastic galwhoa... this is incredible! I LOVE it, gorgeous. I've had thoughts like this on more than one occasion. I love the flow and rhyme scheme, its wonderful. "Holding your hand I stare into your face" my favorite line. Presents a picture so believable. Anyways keep it up & write on,
-Em
4/3/2006 c1 219Matthew James Current
Gorgeous work. Love metaphor, and the imagery is just beautiful. Definitely impressive work here. It paints such a lovely, sad picture. Great work. "Twilight" is such a powerful word. Hope you are doing well ^_^
219Matthew James CurrentGorgeous work. Love metaphor, and the imagery is just beautiful. Definitely impressive work here. It paints such a lovely, sad picture. Great work. "Twilight" is such a powerful word. Hope you are doing well ^_^
2/15/2006 c1 how do i delete this
wow. really good. I know this may sound a little dumb, but, what's a Mormon? I'm sorry if that offends you, but I don't really know, and I want to know... honestly... anyway, thanx 4 ur review 4 "Why?"! ^^ it was really appreciated! Am I rambling? O.O I was also wondering if you could plz r&r my other stories? thanks! once again: this poem is really good! i like it a lot! u rock! happeh writings!-Shaddow
wow. really good. I know this may sound a little dumb, but, what's a Mormon? I'm sorry if that offends you, but I don't really know, and I want to know... honestly... anyway, thanx 4 ur review 4 "Why?"! ^^ it was really appreciated! Am I rambling? O.O I was also wondering if you could plz r&r my other stories? thanks! once again: this poem is really good! i like it a lot! u rock! happeh writings!-Shaddow
2/6/2006 c1 40Dr. Colleen
Hey, I know it has been quite a while since Ilast posted a review. I just feel kind of monotonous saying the same thing over and over again:You are great, you are great, you are great!God Bless,Dr. Colleen
40Dr. ColleenHey, I know it has been quite a while since Ilast posted a review. I just feel kind of monotonous saying the same thing over and over again:You are great, you are great, you are great!God Bless,Dr. Colleen
1/15/2006 c1 21Indigo Williams
Its nice to come back to your work after such a long time and see that you have improved!
21Indigo WilliamsIts nice to come back to your work after such a long time and see that you have improved!
7/12/2005 c1 34Ethereal Kisses
Heya,
Wow! This poem is deeply moving, and makes me wish that someday I could love someone as much as the poem describes ... I especially admire the way you used the title - Twilight - as a metaphor for the poem and of dying love. Simply amazing ;)
~ Ethereal Kisses ~
34Ethereal KissesHeya,
Wow! This poem is deeply moving, and makes me wish that someday I could love someone as much as the poem describes ... I especially admire the way you used the title - Twilight - as a metaphor for the poem and of dying love. Simply amazing ;)
~ Ethereal Kisses ~
7/7/2005 c1 85TheLastKiss
I liked it. Especially the imagery as if speaking to someone or something. Great job.
Thanks for your wonderful review, as always! :)
Best Wishes, Brittney
85TheLastKissI liked it. Especially the imagery as if speaking to someone or something. Great job.
Thanks for your wonderful review, as always! :)
Best Wishes, Brittney
7/4/2005 c1 AubriannaKnight
Awe that's so sweet. SORRY for the self advertisment but can you check out some of my unreviewed poems and let me know if they are ne good!
Awe that's so sweet. SORRY for the self advertisment but can you check out some of my unreviewed poems and let me know if they are ne good!