for Withered11/15/2005 c1 
6MizSphinx
This, oddly, makes me depict a raisin. You know how raisins wither and shrink in the sun? Right. Anywho, I would've really liked to her to song to this. I figure the music would be somewhat sad and deep just like how the poem is and just like how I love all my poems.
To sum it up: Great job!
As usual,
Mentally Malfunctioned,
SoulfulRepentance
6MizSphinxThis, oddly, makes me depict a raisin. You know how raisins wither and shrink in the sun? Right. Anywho, I would've really liked to her to song to this. I figure the music would be somewhat sad and deep just like how the poem is and just like how I love all my poems.
To sum it up: Great job!
As usual,
Mentally Malfunctioned,
SoulfulRepentance
7/24/2005 c1 55Taolei
This poem brings good emotion too it, it makes me feel really alone and confused. I do not know if that is what you intended but that's how I feel. Haha. In whole this is a very well written poem. I would love to hear it with music, it would make a beautiful song. Anyways, good luck and continue writing!
55TaoleiThis poem brings good emotion too it, it makes me feel really alone and confused. I do not know if that is what you intended but that's how I feel. Haha. In whole this is a very well written poem. I would love to hear it with music, it would make a beautiful song. Anyways, good luck and continue writing!
7/6/2005 c1 selene909
I don't know if I like this or not. But it makes me feel. I don't know what i feel but It makes me feel none the less. Which is what a good poem does so I guess I do like it.
dark88poet
p.s.
that made no sensesorry
I don't know if I like this or not. But it makes me feel. I don't know what i feel but It makes me feel none the less. Which is what a good poem does so I guess I do like it.
dark88poet
p.s.
that made no sensesorry