for Hear the Devil Whisper9/7/2005 c3 chocolate addict
your story is great; great characters, setting, and as far as i can see, great plot. please, please, PLEASE dont discontinue your story; its one of my favorites. anyway, if you want more ppl to read this, change the summery, because you seem to focused on solely Ripley and Hunter, but in your summery, you seem to off in a different direction, and you might want to change that (the summery really dont give you a good first impression, and the most important thing to attract readers is to make the summery attractive- advertising). also, you might want to consider placing your story in the romance catagory, and have supernatural as a subcatagory. more ppl seem to read romance that supernatural ^.^ keep up the awesome writing!
your story is great; great characters, setting, and as far as i can see, great plot. please, please, PLEASE dont discontinue your story; its one of my favorites. anyway, if you want more ppl to read this, change the summery, because you seem to focused on solely Ripley and Hunter, but in your summery, you seem to off in a different direction, and you might want to change that (the summery really dont give you a good first impression, and the most important thing to attract readers is to make the summery attractive- advertising). also, you might want to consider placing your story in the romance catagory, and have supernatural as a subcatagory. more ppl seem to read romance that supernatural ^.^ keep up the awesome writing!
8/9/2005 c3 anonymous
you must continue to write this story! i love it! i always liked these kind of plots! please update and ill keep reviewing!
you must continue to write this story! i love it! i always liked these kind of plots! please update and ill keep reviewing!
8/4/2005 c3 yackermoon
Hey, I really like your story and I do think you should continue... there are too few decent if not exellent "loup-garou" fictions on fictionpress... we can always use one more!
Hey, I really like your story and I do think you should continue... there are too few decent if not exellent "loup-garou" fictions on fictionpress... we can always use one more!
7/5/2005 c1 
2ooies
=) Gj but I myself preferr Loup-garou to cannibis, i'm sure i'll survive ^_^ Have you ever read Blood and chocolate? You should its critically aclaimed as the best werewolf book and i personally love it! Anyway i'm glad to finally find a supernatural story that strikes my curiosity without dousing it w/ a bunch clingy sickening romantic crud... i believe your doing a good job though i especially enjoyed the cake fight...though i was slightly disappointed that Hunter seemingly "forgot" about her... anyway I don't have any critques so far but i'll let you know! keep it up!
2ooies=) Gj but I myself preferr Loup-garou to cannibis, i'm sure i'll survive ^_^ Have you ever read Blood and chocolate? You should its critically aclaimed as the best werewolf book and i personally love it! Anyway i'm glad to finally find a supernatural story that strikes my curiosity without dousing it w/ a bunch clingy sickening romantic crud... i believe your doing a good job though i especially enjoyed the cake fight...though i was slightly disappointed that Hunter seemingly "forgot" about her... anyway I don't have any critques so far but i'll let you know! keep it up!