for Polished Nails on the Dance Floor7/7/2006 c1 
35andrealiz
i.love.this. everything is so descriptive, so full of emotion. it's just absolutely breath-taking.
35andrealizi.love.this. everything is so descriptive, so full of emotion. it's just absolutely breath-taking.
10/23/2005 c1 16Theory Of The 4th Dimension
So vibrant and it really does remind me of a dance. And the desriptions are so pretty as well. Nice work.
16Theory Of The 4th DimensionSo vibrant and it really does remind me of a dance. And the desriptions are so pretty as well. Nice work.
9/20/2005 c1 64not sure yet
very intense and colorful, muchly enjoyable and sexual and stuff, awesome job
64not sure yetvery intense and colorful, muchly enjoyable and sexual and stuff, awesome job
7/29/2005 c1 168SeaVoi
Cool, It reminds me of that tango thing Shakira did. "Next to her cheap silicon I look minimal" thats just about all I can pull out of my head.
168SeaVoiCool, It reminds me of that tango thing Shakira did. "Next to her cheap silicon I look minimal" thats just about all I can pull out of my head.
7/27/2005 c1 83Prevaricate
Beautiful. The emotion is evident, although the tone is almost passive; the choice of words and the theme is original. Very, very good.
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83PrevaricateBeautiful. The emotion is evident, although the tone is almost passive; the choice of words and the theme is original. Very, very good.
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7/27/2005 c1 183writerforever
Beautiful! I really like it, it's so deep and well written. Going on my favs list :)
183writerforeverBeautiful! I really like it, it's so deep and well written. Going on my favs list :)
7/21/2005 c1 194Aslan Israel
Passionate fighting, hinting of the romanceWe had & you lost;
ONe of my favorite lines. Rough and down to earth, like I could hear the music they were dancing to. Brilliant.
194Aslan IsraelPassionate fighting, hinting of the romanceWe had & you lost;
ONe of my favorite lines. Rough and down to earth, like I could hear the music they were dancing to. Brilliant.
7/16/2005 c1 addie pray
Gorgeous imagery and format, it flowed so smoothly. I love the "and you - and i-" parts, they worked brilliantly. Well done.
Gorgeous imagery and format, it flowed so smoothly. I love the "and you - and i-" parts, they worked brilliantly. Well done.
7/14/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
I love this poem... the title is great and the beginning is awesome & so is the end and the middle is great too ::adds to favs::
612simpleplan13I love this poem... the title is great and the beginning is awesome & so is the end and the middle is great too ::adds to favs::