for My Life9/23/2005 c1 Z.Z. Villa
Wow. Those first 4 lines are ingenious. And yes "The Break Room" will be continued in more, independent short episodes. Actually, it's in the process of being converted into a web comic. A prototype will be released and if people want more, then, more will be drawn, but yes, that series is going to be added to. Go me for plugging on your reviews. Great poem!
Wow. Those first 4 lines are ingenious. And yes "The Break Room" will be continued in more, independent short episodes. Actually, it's in the process of being converted into a web comic. A prototype will be released and if people want more, then, more will be drawn, but yes, that series is going to be added to. Go me for plugging on your reviews. Great poem!
8/24/2005 c1 
5a.plain.simple.love
it's really good. ^_^ very poetic. (btw, this is tara) keep it up. hooray!
5a.plain.simple.loveit's really good. ^_^ very poetic. (btw, this is tara) keep it up. hooray!
7/10/2005 c1 67nevermore the silent cry
oh cool! we love! very cool wording, i love the staircase thing. awesomeness, on to read more
67nevermore the silent cryoh cool! we love! very cool wording, i love the staircase thing. awesomeness, on to read more
7/6/2005 c1 70Aryanda
I like how you compare your life to a sheet of paper, near empty. people assume too fast that their life has already reached its low and high points, yet what they really got was a simple taste of what is to come. this is really good free verse, it actually has a good subject! unlike me when i write...i swear i'm made up completely of randomness. Anyways, wonderful poem, I really liked it. Keep it up!
70AryandaI like how you compare your life to a sheet of paper, near empty. people assume too fast that their life has already reached its low and high points, yet what they really got was a simple taste of what is to come. this is really good free verse, it actually has a good subject! unlike me when i write...i swear i'm made up completely of randomness. Anyways, wonderful poem, I really liked it. Keep it up!