for Rebellion From the Fire7/6/2005 c1 
126swift sky silver
i think the story's pretty interesting so far, but i would care for more detail, like the setting for example, and what vicki looks like... perhaps even more emphasis on the pain. keep writing =0)
ps. could u please read tragic traitor tactics? i'd appreciate ur feedback
126swift sky silveri think the story's pretty interesting so far, but i would care for more detail, like the setting for example, and what vicki looks like... perhaps even more emphasis on the pain. keep writing =0)
ps. could u please read tragic traitor tactics? i'd appreciate ur feedback