7/21/2005 c1 59Lakoria
That was good: simple, but complex. Good job and keep it up!
God bless, Lakoria
That was good: simple, but complex. Good job and keep it up!
God bless, Lakoria
7/14/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
very cool change in emotione from the beginning to the end... i like the title too
very cool change in emotione from the beginning to the end... i like the title too
7/13/2005 c1 90poetic abortion
a truely lovely poem. thank you for the review to: lulled in, it mean a lot.
~* noelle
a truely lovely poem. thank you for the review to: lulled in, it mean a lot.
~* noelle
7/10/2005 c1 Aussie-Goddess
Very good poem... enjoyed it a lot! Thanks for the reviews!
Very good poem... enjoyed it a lot! Thanks for the reviews!
7/7/2005 c1 14Scales of Sapphire
I like your ending, it made me laugh. And the advice your say in your summery is so true but sad. Happy Writing!
I like your ending, it made me laugh. And the advice your say in your summery is so true but sad. Happy Writing!
7/7/2005 c1 12eighteen hundred
This was alright, maybe just a little bit too bare/bluntly worded though, if that makes sense.
This was alright, maybe just a little bit too bare/bluntly worded though, if that makes sense.