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12/20/2005 c1 43Brittany Studer
It says a lot with a few words. Well done. Great poem.-Brittany :)
7/21/2005 c1 59Lakoria
That was good: simple, but complex. Good job and keep it up!

God bless, Lakoria
7/16/2005 c1 breezy nostrils
Sad, but I like the style. Nice!
7/14/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
very cool change in emotione from the beginning to the end... i like the title too
7/13/2005 c1 90poetic abortion
a truely lovely poem. thank you for the review to: lulled in, it mean a lot.

~* noelle
7/13/2005 c1 6xraspberrykissesx
Hmm. A really good poem. Filled with feelings!Good job!
7/12/2005 c1 arcane devices
lovely, keep writing. -ADD
7/10/2005 c1 Aussie-Goddess
Very good poem... enjoyed it a lot! Thanks for the reviews!
7/7/2005 c1 81Princess-anna57
Great piece! Keep it up!

~Anna~
7/7/2005 c1 14Scales of Sapphire
I like your ending, it made me laugh. And the advice your say in your summery is so true but sad. Happy Writing!
7/7/2005 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
Quite nice.
7/7/2005 c1 12eighteen hundred
This was alright, maybe just a little bit too bare/bluntly worded though, if that makes sense.
7/7/2005 c1 63lackluster
oh wow. great poem! i like the message behind it.

~tuesday

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