
7/8/2005 c1
16Maruit
I like how it easy to conect with. It is part of being human to want that world wich so often only exists in the space of the mind. However I would suggest using the word dream less, perhaps using a thesaurus to find other words meaning the same thing since the poem was some what repeditory in the beginning.

I like how it easy to conect with. It is part of being human to want that world wich so often only exists in the space of the mind. However I would suggest using the word dream less, perhaps using a thesaurus to find other words meaning the same thing since the poem was some what repeditory in the beginning.