
7/7/2005 c1
8A-wolf-called-Skya
Wow, i'll like that one! the idea was interesting. just near the start, it sounded a bit stressed. the last half was the best, i think. it just needs some revising.
good writing!
-Rachel.
*Every legend leaves a mark*

Wow, i'll like that one! the idea was interesting. just near the start, it sounded a bit stressed. the last half was the best, i think. it just needs some revising.
good writing!
-Rachel.
*Every legend leaves a mark*