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7/27/2013 c1 43fantasybookworm2012
9/13/2012 c1 Thorn
lol, awesome
5/25/2008 c1 6Hed in the Cloudz
I like the randomness! The title is intriguing in its lack of relation to the actual poetry, and this lack of connection makes it fun to think about how it could be relevant. Fun fun fun!

I don't like the lack of end punctuation, though. It seems so empty, to have a poem that ends (but might not...). Now it's open for extension at any time, and readers will never be satisfied... :)

I'm serious, though. It's messing with my brain every time I see that there's no period at the end.
12/29/2005 c1 1AmbroseMaximilien
Very simplistic and i like how the whole poem narrows down at the very bottom, like an upside down pyramid.

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