for Get Away7/14/2008 c1 
70PoetryQueen
I liked that a lot! Except for the last stanza. I didn't like the Go by... That made it weird. Maybe you could change the words in that stanza a bit. Other than that, great job!
70PoetryQueenI liked that a lot! Except for the last stanza. I didn't like the Go by... That made it weird. Maybe you could change the words in that stanza a bit. Other than that, great job!