
7/15/2005 c1 waitandhope
Well, I'm no judge of songs, and I wish I could hear the tune, but the lyrics are beautiful.
Well, I'm no judge of songs, and I wish I could hear the tune, but the lyrics are beautiful.
7/11/2005 c1
59Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys
Well done, this song is so good and so relevant to now. This was amazingly well written and the flow was perfect. Well Done and thanks 4 mi review ^_^

Well done, this song is so good and so relevant to now. This was amazingly well written and the flow was perfect. Well Done and thanks 4 mi review ^_^
7/10/2005 c1
95beti213
oh pretty. I was reminded of those songs americans wrote about 9/11 and how popular they came to be. I know that's not the point of writing a song like this, but still, it could easily become one of those, except for the britain transit disaster. random thought. anyway, I like this a lot. well done.

oh pretty. I was reminded of those songs americans wrote about 9/11 and how popular they came to be. I know that's not the point of writing a song like this, but still, it could easily become one of those, except for the britain transit disaster. random thought. anyway, I like this a lot. well done.
7/9/2005 c1 binderem
Woah.This is SO beautiful. The rhyming is great, and it has so much feeling and depth. You can express your feelings so well in poetry. Keep writing, you could be great.
Woah.This is SO beautiful. The rhyming is great, and it has so much feeling and depth. You can express your feelings so well in poetry. Keep writing, you could be great.