
7/9/2005 c2 Mintelwerke
Wow, this was a really great read, I'm surprised it's gone so unnoticed. I love how your characters talk so fluidly with each other, and how you put emphasis on the right words to make it sound like actual conversation.
Shyla seems like a very interesting character, and you've really piqued my interest with what has happened to her so far. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Wow, this was a really great read, I'm surprised it's gone so unnoticed. I love how your characters talk so fluidly with each other, and how you put emphasis on the right words to make it sound like actual conversation.
Shyla seems like a very interesting character, and you've really piqued my interest with what has happened to her so far. I can't wait to see what happens next.