for The Worst of Wounds7/28/2005 c1 
118origamikitty
...amazing. Many people can't pull of abab rhyme schemes - they come off sing-songy and cheesy. Vivid imagery, fun plays on words, and a nice, nice rhythm. Gah. Amazing.
118origamikitty...amazing. Many people can't pull of abab rhyme schemes - they come off sing-songy and cheesy. Vivid imagery, fun plays on words, and a nice, nice rhythm. Gah. Amazing.
7/27/2005 c1 2Arialla
I like it =). It reminds me of all the timeless pieces - classic poetry, I guess you could say. Keep it up!
~ Aria
2AriallaI like it =). It reminds me of all the timeless pieces - classic poetry, I guess you could say. Keep it up!
~ Aria
7/14/2005 c1 19Kiran S
hey, wow this was an amazing piece. i love the way you worded your thoughts. nicely done! it makes the meaning behind the poem more vivid.
btw thanx for the awesome review! it's very much appriciated!
-kiran
19Kiran Shey, wow this was an amazing piece. i love the way you worded your thoughts. nicely done! it makes the meaning behind the poem more vivid.
btw thanx for the awesome review! it's very much appriciated!
-kiran
7/10/2005 c1 42Emmytastic gal
*stares with mouth wide open* WOW. I never cease to be amazed by your talent. This is totally and completely astounding. I love every aspect of it, and the ending fit beautifully. Your words are so beautiful and true. Have you ever sent your stuff to a publisher? I would buy anything by you in a second. Keep it up dude you've got some great stuff happening in that mind.
write on,-Em
42Emmytastic gal*stares with mouth wide open* WOW. I never cease to be amazed by your talent. This is totally and completely astounding. I love every aspect of it, and the ending fit beautifully. Your words are so beautiful and true. Have you ever sent your stuff to a publisher? I would buy anything by you in a second. Keep it up dude you've got some great stuff happening in that mind.
write on,-Em