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1/10/2006 c1 20Pheobe Meryll
Good theme, and good setup; however, it was too short to really give a whole lot of impact. I would lenghten it a little to get my point better across. That said, I liked this and the way you began it, although "forteen hundred and ninety two" should be "FOURTEEN hundred, etc." Nice.
7/19/2005 c1 34daedal
That was really touching
7/12/2005 c1 1samonalarealidad
Hmm...how very, very true
7/12/2005 c1 darknessdragon2213
This is very well written great job ^_^
7/12/2005 c1 131theory of black
This is very well written. I think that if anyone disagrees with you, its because they havent found love... I agree with you! I like the comparisons to technology imperfections to the perfection of love.

*Two thumbs up!*
7/12/2005 c1 8gangster-dolly
Ah, very true. Enjoyed.

-gangster-dolly

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