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7/13/2005 c1 8Mystic-Rain-444
um . . . sobe? just a guess. but hey you have Randy now! so be all happy! Nice poem - repetitive like the evil girl said - but i think that's what you were going for, no? It's just a mind set - and if you haven't been in it - you won't get it. Obviously, she's never felt like that. Anyway, keep writing - maybe you should write a poem about Randy - or the guys online. lol. Have fun!
7/12/2005 c1 AubriannaKnight
I think it sounds more like a musing than a poem, and was way to redundant. I got bored after a couple lines and had to force the rest.

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