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4/18/2006 c1 4A. J. Weyler
Lovely, lovely. There were two lines that I had to read twice and three times to understand, so you may want to find a way to make them simpler without making them less poetic, if that's entirely possible. Here are the lines:

"Pleadingly he breathes words that make no sense to someone who isn't there just to ease an ache that won't leave"

"For what I have to say to matter enough to be said"

Thanks for the review, by the way. And I /always/ return reviews. :D

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