for Good Weather For Airstrikes4/28/2009 c1 Breath Caught Holding
Yeah, its a little weird, but its good. It seems like I read a similar story but with less cryptic language. Hm...
Yeah, its a little weird, but its good. It seems like I read a similar story but with less cryptic language. Hm...
7/23/2005 c1 k454i
Um... Hi. Wow. I was going through Slims favorite stories/authors, and found some of yours... I decided to look at your others, and found this one.The first time I saw this video, I bawled my eyes out, because I knew it was something I, myself could expirience. My parents deeply bred homophobia being the thing to pull me apart from the girl I love, and so, I keep quiet and look away from them. They don't know and I don't want them to. I wish I could express my love as fully, kissing in public and such, but I cannot.
Because I could be hurt for it.
Reading this story, practically a recap of the video, and amazing in itself, as you have gone further, guessing what the boys thought, thinking about how they must have felt... I nearly cried. It's those dolls... the representation of two broken souls being lost and then found again, still together as always.
You have done an amazing job of bringing this video to life in literary format, something I didn't think could be done, since I express things more visually than with my words.
Beautiful, honestly just beautiful.
Um... Hi. Wow. I was going through Slims favorite stories/authors, and found some of yours... I decided to look at your others, and found this one.The first time I saw this video, I bawled my eyes out, because I knew it was something I, myself could expirience. My parents deeply bred homophobia being the thing to pull me apart from the girl I love, and so, I keep quiet and look away from them. They don't know and I don't want them to. I wish I could express my love as fully, kissing in public and such, but I cannot.
Because I could be hurt for it.
Reading this story, practically a recap of the video, and amazing in itself, as you have gone further, guessing what the boys thought, thinking about how they must have felt... I nearly cried. It's those dolls... the representation of two broken souls being lost and then found again, still together as always.
You have done an amazing job of bringing this video to life in literary format, something I didn't think could be done, since I express things more visually than with my words.
Beautiful, honestly just beautiful.
7/21/2005 c1 
6Lolita SM Morbid
Wow. Oh, wow. That was absolutely beautiful. You're a superb writer, and I envy your skills. I love this fic (just like I love most of your work). Breathtaking, really. It made me curiously sad.
Broken dolls and riverstone eyes. "There was more than one way to have doll eyes." Ohh, I love this story.
6Lolita SM MorbidWow. Oh, wow. That was absolutely beautiful. You're a superb writer, and I envy your skills. I love this fic (just like I love most of your work). Breathtaking, really. It made me curiously sad.
Broken dolls and riverstone eyes. "There was more than one way to have doll eyes." Ohh, I love this story.
7/13/2005 c1 80citrus scented
beautiful. mesmorising. haunting. terrificly terribly sad, and yet so delicately beautiful. hehei loved: "before the rot of the world set into their tiny china heads"" No doll's expression could compare to the blank sheet behind his eyes."" lips parted like bedsheets, not understanding why-" just absorbed me totally, and really touched me. absolutly awesome, i loved the passion and love into it. wonderful and cleverly crafted piece of writing, bout to check out the video.
80citrus scentedbeautiful. mesmorising. haunting. terrificly terribly sad, and yet so delicately beautiful. hehei loved: "before the rot of the world set into their tiny china heads"" No doll's expression could compare to the blank sheet behind his eyes."" lips parted like bedsheets, not understanding why-" just absorbed me totally, and really touched me. absolutly awesome, i loved the passion and love into it. wonderful and cleverly crafted piece of writing, bout to check out the video.