for I Love You, My Dear11/24/2006 c1 
3Da Vinci at Work
It's a very well constructed poem. (By the way, I love your profile and your username. Wanderingnachos. Haha.)
3Da Vinci at WorkIt's a very well constructed poem. (By the way, I love your profile and your username. Wanderingnachos. Haha.)
12/6/2005 c1 melissa
ANOTHER great poem...sigh how do u make these up? sob, i can't write for my life... it's a bit depressing but very good!
ANOTHER great poem...sigh how do u make these up? sob, i can't write for my life... it's a bit depressing but very good!
10/30/2005 c1 26Bunnie09
Wowii. This is so SAD! I wish someone cared bout meh. Sadly, no one does. Oh, well. Keep it up! *heart*
Sayonara! pyrofiregirl101
26Bunnie09Wowii. This is so SAD! I wish someone cared bout meh. Sadly, no one does. Oh, well. Keep it up! *heart*
Sayonara! pyrofiregirl101
9/21/2005 c1 Dark Angel
Great poem! I really loved the stanza I want to scream/But I can't seem to breathe/I want to dream/But I can't fall asleep. Also I loved the stanza The world merely sneers/At those who shed tears/So no one will be there/For those who despair. Keep up the great job!
Great poem! I really loved the stanza I want to scream/But I can't seem to breathe/I want to dream/But I can't fall asleep. Also I loved the stanza The world merely sneers/At those who shed tears/So no one will be there/For those who despair. Keep up the great job!
8/31/2005 c1 Joy
What the bob? are you feeling ok? is there somthing your not telling me? am i looking at the wrong persons stuff? HELLO?
ok...i didnt even bother finishing it...cuz i hate sad things...sad sad sad...
What the bob? are you feeling ok? is there somthing your not telling me? am i looking at the wrong persons stuff? HELLO?
ok...i didnt even bother finishing it...cuz i hate sad things...sad sad sad...
7/30/2005 c1 Katie
I love the first stanza..."I want to scream/but I can't seem to breathe/I want to dream/but I can't fall asleep." Its very resonantly pretty to me for some reason! Good poem, keep it up!
I love the first stanza..."I want to scream/but I can't seem to breathe/I want to dream/but I can't fall asleep." Its very resonantly pretty to me for some reason! Good poem, keep it up!
7/13/2005 c1 5pencilchewer
I like this I can relate especially to the part (Nobody cares to hear meAnd any of my frustrationsThey’re all too busyWith their own exasperations) and the reest was good to nice job
5pencilchewerI like this I can relate especially to the part (Nobody cares to hear meAnd any of my frustrationsThey’re all too busyWith their own exasperations) and the reest was good to nice job