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11/24/2006 c1 3Da Vinci at Work
It's a very well constructed poem. (By the way, I love your profile and your username. Wanderingnachos. Haha.)
12/6/2005 c1 melissa
ANOTHER great poem...sigh how do u make these up? sob, i can't write for my life... it's a bit depressing but very good!
10/30/2005 c1 26Bunnie09
Wowii. This is so SAD! I wish someone cared bout meh. Sadly, no one does. Oh, well. Keep it up! *heart*

Sayonara! pyrofiregirl101
9/21/2005 c1 Dark Angel
Great poem! I really loved the stanza I want to scream/But I can't seem to breathe/I want to dream/But I can't fall asleep. Also I loved the stanza The world merely sneers/At those who shed tears/So no one will be there/For those who despair. Keep up the great job!
8/31/2005 c1 Joy
What the bob? are you feeling ok? is there somthing your not telling me? am i looking at the wrong persons stuff? HELLO?

ok...i didnt even bother finishing it...cuz i hate sad things...sad sad sad...
7/30/2005 c1 Katie
I love the first stanza..."I want to scream/but I can't seem to breathe/I want to dream/but I can't fall asleep." Its very resonantly pretty to me for some reason! Good poem, keep it up!
7/21/2005 c1 13Saxifrage
beautiful poem! ^_^ i love it.

7/13/2005 c1 5pencilchewer
I like this I can relate especially to the part (Nobody cares to hear meAnd any of my frustrationsThey’re all too busyWith their own exasperations) and the reest was good to nice job

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