for Do It12/10/2005 c1 
39SliversofSilverPain
woah. the voice of temptation. eep. scary. but still cool! you have a point with this.Thanks for the review, by the way. The red/white swtich just... seemed right.But you're correct as well; it was the Chinese though who switched it... I think it was because the body is pale in death... who knows. sorry, i ramble too! ^.^
39SliversofSilverPainwoah. the voice of temptation. eep. scary. but still cool! you have a point with this.Thanks for the review, by the way. The red/white swtich just... seemed right.But you're correct as well; it was the Chinese though who switched it... I think it was because the body is pale in death... who knows. sorry, i ramble too! ^.^
10/16/2005 c1 Leaving Fictionpress
I'm not entirely sure whether this is pro- or anti-drug...doesn't matter, either way it's still powerful. I like it. I've always thought there was a kind of sad beauty in a stoner...I'm probably just being over-romantic and melodramatic, though. I don't know...This makes me think about Jim Morrison and Janis Joplin and all the other classic rock musicians who O.D.ed...their music just wouldn't be the same without that added depth, you know? Anyway, I'm very impressed. Keep it up.
I'm not entirely sure whether this is pro- or anti-drug...doesn't matter, either way it's still powerful. I like it. I've always thought there was a kind of sad beauty in a stoner...I'm probably just being over-romantic and melodramatic, though. I don't know...This makes me think about Jim Morrison and Janis Joplin and all the other classic rock musicians who O.D.ed...their music just wouldn't be the same without that added depth, you know? Anyway, I'm very impressed. Keep it up.
8/25/2005 c1 2chocolatecoveredcherries
Hm. Thing is, what was odd, is it convinced me not to do it..Does that make sense?But it was really good.
I was waiting for a very parent like line at the end "Go ahead screw up your life" kinda thing, but it wasn't
very good!
(I'm not trying to convince anyone to do drugs either in this review)
2chocolatecoveredcherriesHm. Thing is, what was odd, is it convinced me not to do it..Does that make sense?But it was really good.
I was waiting for a very parent like line at the end "Go ahead screw up your life" kinda thing, but it wasn't
very good!
(I'm not trying to convince anyone to do drugs either in this review)
7/18/2005 c1 59Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys
This was...how to say...different, good voice out of your opinions tho, i liked it and it was meaningful, well done and nicely put together. Keep it up ^_^
59Sacred-Phoenix-NephthysThis was...how to say...different, good voice out of your opinions tho, i liked it and it was meaningful, well done and nicely put together. Keep it up ^_^
7/13/2005 c1 neverlove again
very nice poem. i love it. i will take the adive.
very nice poem. i love it. i will take the adive.
7/13/2005 c1 14method acting
I liked the perspective in this, straightforward, but it all pulled together. I'm curious as to your opinion on this. In any case, a nice bit of writing.
14method actingI liked the perspective in this, straightforward, but it all pulled together. I'm curious as to your opinion on this. In any case, a nice bit of writing.