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7/30/2009 c1 9Sakina the Fallen Angel
Wow, another cute poem that speaks the truth! :)

~ Sakina x
1/25/2009 c1 5Punchadara
Cool! I think these could be lyrics to a really good tune! You might not be into this type of music, but your poem kind of reminds me of this group Metronomy's lyrics. Check them out!
8/7/2008 c1 24fairies and snapple
Funny (the end) and I like the child-like style you wrote it in. And that it's happy, even if it's not really.
1/13/2008 c1 4GrannyP
I like the idea of the head pointing down and then being further from the ground as hope comes along. Very nice way to put it!
8/19/2007 c1 6concerto49
I like the title. It's good to have hope.

A hint of angst, yet hope holds.

I didn't really get the start - walking around and all, but it was cool. I guess it was the fuss and confusion there.

Hm, anyhow. Cheers.
6/24/2006 c1 1Child of the Unicorns
Hope!I love it!I`m telling you,you are a natural poet!On a bad day that would really give me a lift!You did a GREAT job!Keep writing!
3/3/2006 c1 1Baka-Pyros
HI! i was reading the reviews you wrote for my brother! (thewarlord, author of rider of wind) i'm really glad you like his story! i really like you poem! it stands true for many people. i could tell that there were some rhyming lines (maybe on accident?) but i couldn't pick out a rhyme scheme. could you maybe tell me what it is? also, i love the critique that you give for writers! i'm redoing one of my stories, and i was wondreing if maybe you could give me some pointers? (your really seem to know what your doing!) it's called sin of the wolves. if you don't read it it's perfectly fine! i'm just so excited someone likes gary's story! (i'm buggin him to add to it!)-Baka_Pyros
2/10/2006 c1 1Brighde
Aw, I love this! Hah, I think we can all relate to it on some level. Great word choice too btw :)

-B. Blum
10/20/2005 c1 12Don'tGiveUpSoSoon
I can so relate to this! I always wish that the guy i like liked me too.. :*( *sniff sniff* ah i'll be ok lol. write more! they're really good!
9/18/2005 c1 23Teah Marie
I love this, probably because this is actually how i think most of the time.
9/1/2005 c1 Gnat10886
I'm a sucker for romance and can totally relate to this poem, specially now that I'm at college with all the good eye candy. Awesome blossom!
8/7/2005 c1 5Jahar
Another good poem. I hope you got your lover in the end.
7/25/2005 c1 2Casey Drake
your poem and my story really go together, don't they?

Cool poem.

:) CD
7/15/2005 c1 42Tortugapoet
Did you mean me? If so, you are so sweet! I loved it. I hope that Hope is around. Look up Drea in the dictionary and you see "Syn. hopeless" But yeah, thanks if it was dedicated to me. Tortuga means turtle in spanish, cuz I love turtles. :) Drea
7/13/2005 c1 119Whisper on the Lips
YYEAH! HE LOVES YOU!

now if you factor in the distractions that took FIVE MINUTES of my time...BUT I DON'T CARE ! i like this poem. (=

Very well. WRITE ON! (=
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