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9/3/2005 c1 133Dying Rose
This is a beautiful poem. It speaks so openly, freely, of love and loss. The wording is exquisite and whispers over and over in my head. Wonderful job!
8/20/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
very nice.. I love the ending & thanks for your review
7/30/2005 c1 232Second Hand Screams
Not bad. A little simple, but it works with the theme. The rhythm's a bit awkward in some parts, but I don't know the tune it fits w/, so maybe I'm wrong.

Thanks for your review. To explain the title: "Beware the Ides of March" was a line spoken to Ceaser by a soothsayer in Shakespeare's play "Julius Ceaser," and basically it means "don't get to comfortable. You're at the top of your game right now, but it's gonna turn around and crash on you." That's what the song's about, only applied to a relationship.

Hope that helps!

Anna
7/30/2005 c1 92Fate Defied
awesome song. like the title. k/w~shadowofyou~
7/20/2005 c1 3E.G.R. Woods
very nice. i hope the way it sounds in my head is similar to how you composed it. and thank you for your comments on my first posting, and your nice words.
7/14/2005 c1 34MeAgAiNsTtHeMuZic44
I really adored that. The emotions blew me away.
7/14/2005 c1 18Frosty Pickle Juice
it rhymes a tad to much for me, but it's pretty good.
7/14/2005 c1 81Princess-anna57
These song lyrics are awesome! I really like them! Keep writing!

~Anna~

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