for The Dancing Widow3/15/2007 c1 Ariana
Wow emochan..thats a really beautiful way of phrasing that. It is a really pretty story. Short, but a lot of imagery. I like it!
Wow emochan..thats a really beautiful way of phrasing that. It is a really pretty story. Short, but a lot of imagery. I like it!
3/12/2006 c1 
24ShigoGouhou
A beautiful tale. The imagery is very strong; however, I would have liked to see some of the "twinkles of hope" mentioned after the list of sad memories. Other than that, it was a very well-written piece.
24ShigoGouhouA beautiful tale. The imagery is very strong; however, I would have liked to see some of the "twinkles of hope" mentioned after the list of sad memories. Other than that, it was a very well-written piece.
7/18/2005 c1 HatredsGirl
I liked it
I liked it