for The Fairest of Them All7/2/2016 c1 AbyssScript
This is an awesome story. Perfect in length. Love the clever mix of poetry. And, most importantly, though the man is so full of himself, you manage not to hate the guy. Extra credit to Tim though. If I met the guy in real life, I wouldn't be able to stand even five minutes with him. I'd love to hear how Tim does it.
Anyways, thank you for the read. It was quite entertaining.
This is an awesome story. Perfect in length. Love the clever mix of poetry. And, most importantly, though the man is so full of himself, you manage not to hate the guy. Extra credit to Tim though. If I met the guy in real life, I wouldn't be able to stand even five minutes with him. I'd love to hear how Tim does it.
Anyways, thank you for the read. It was quite entertaining.
12/26/2005 c1 
6Starlite Nightfall
OMG! I love it! Ahaha, that's great! Cute too! Go you! *hugs your story* ta ta!
6Starlite NightfallOMG! I love it! Ahaha, that's great! Cute too! Go you! *hugs your story* ta ta!
11/21/2005 c1 Lyn Kinsei
That was interesting. Kind of hard to follow. But I could understand it. It was good but it could use a little more work like what else is there to the story? It seems like something to be continued. But it is good.
That was interesting. Kind of hard to follow. But I could understand it. It was good but it could use a little more work like what else is there to the story? It seems like something to be continued. But it is good.
8/31/2005 c1 32TRpoison-rose
Aw! Humor and romance, my favorite combination. This was really well done. Nice job!
-xx- TRpoison
32TRpoison-roseAw! Humor and romance, my favorite combination. This was really well done. Nice job!
-xx- TRpoison
8/30/2005 c1 blueskelton
I had not realized the fact that Christians had accepted the fact that We are descended from monkeys. Maybe you have met a zillion Anthropologists out there who are all Christians. But I have yet to meet one that does not consider Christianity to be anything but a field of study. Science and religion have never coexisted peacefully unless I suppose Christian Science which is a total mockery of any intelligence at all. I hate to break this to you but not everything was founded by the Christian religion. And the religious status of the founding fathers of Anthropology were not mentioned when I studied them. Considering that most of their works would have got them killed in the inquisition I kind of doubt it. I don't doubt that the fact that there are Christian Anthropologists but they are a white rhino. Lastly any theory that is called The Stoner Theory and the Terminator Theory should not be taken too seriously. Study some anthropology and get back to me. It was a merely a jest in basic Quantum Physics. Not everything you read is meant to be taken seriously.
I had not realized the fact that Christians had accepted the fact that We are descended from monkeys. Maybe you have met a zillion Anthropologists out there who are all Christians. But I have yet to meet one that does not consider Christianity to be anything but a field of study. Science and religion have never coexisted peacefully unless I suppose Christian Science which is a total mockery of any intelligence at all. I hate to break this to you but not everything was founded by the Christian religion. And the religious status of the founding fathers of Anthropology were not mentioned when I studied them. Considering that most of their works would have got them killed in the inquisition I kind of doubt it. I don't doubt that the fact that there are Christian Anthropologists but they are a white rhino. Lastly any theory that is called The Stoner Theory and the Terminator Theory should not be taken too seriously. Study some anthropology and get back to me. It was a merely a jest in basic Quantum Physics. Not everything you read is meant to be taken seriously.
8/30/2005 c1 5Amakusa Ryu
I like the thought of the story. Anyway, thanks for the review the other day. Actually, I agreed on what you wrote so i prefer that you read it again for you to understand my true purpose on writing that essay. Your review helped me a lot on my assignment. I actually need to collect opinions from other people. Anyway, do you know how to edit works using this site? Whenever i need to edit something, I always end up deleting it. Say, if you know how, please, can you tell me. Don't worry, your past review is still in my email and I'm planning to post it again when i have time. Well, thanks again...A LOT! :) You're work is really good.
5Amakusa RyuI like the thought of the story. Anyway, thanks for the review the other day. Actually, I agreed on what you wrote so i prefer that you read it again for you to understand my true purpose on writing that essay. Your review helped me a lot on my assignment. I actually need to collect opinions from other people. Anyway, do you know how to edit works using this site? Whenever i need to edit something, I always end up deleting it. Say, if you know how, please, can you tell me. Don't worry, your past review is still in my email and I'm planning to post it again when i have time. Well, thanks again...A LOT! :) You're work is really good.
7/18/2005 c1 3gypsy madamme
that was interesting. i stared for like three secs when i finished and then just started laughinng. he's a crazy dude. i liked it tho.
3gypsy madammethat was interesting. i stared for like three secs when i finished and then just started laughinng. he's a crazy dude. i liked it tho.
7/15/2005 c1 Pure
I love this story! I think that it’s very good- I loved the “character arc”. I loved how I could read it smoothly, effortlessly, and you got the narcissistic character spot on in my opinion. Cheers!
I love this story! I think that it’s very good- I loved the “character arc”. I loved how I could read it smoothly, effortlessly, and you got the narcissistic character spot on in my opinion. Cheers!
7/15/2005 c1 Sinful ways
Haha. I adore this story. It made me smile.
Haha. I adore this story. It made me smile.