
7/17/2005 c1
8Slowly Sinking
I like the use of brackets in this. The ending's really powerful, especially the double'meaning in the last line (or am i reading too much into that?). Emotive piece.

I like the use of brackets in this. The ending's really powerful, especially the double'meaning in the last line (or am i reading too much into that?). Emotive piece.