
7/20/2005 c1
10Teshgirl
Wonderful poem, with a sweet message. I wish your friend well.
Hakkana: I'll pray for him.
Tesh: *nods* Me too. Anyhoo, good job! ^^ I don't think I could write poetry like that... XD
Tesh : )

Wonderful poem, with a sweet message. I wish your friend well.
Hakkana: I'll pray for him.
Tesh: *nods* Me too. Anyhoo, good job! ^^ I don't think I could write poetry like that... XD
Tesh : )
7/17/2005 c1
9rotted reverie
Funny because I've just nor prayed earnestly for someone backslidden that they may come to know Him in reality and be healed by Him...because He is the only Cure for our pain...all other medicines are vain...hehe, that totally rhymed. Go me!This goes in my favorites for sure.

Funny because I've just nor prayed earnestly for someone backslidden that they may come to know Him in reality and be healed by Him...because He is the only Cure for our pain...all other medicines are vain...hehe, that totally rhymed. Go me!This goes in my favorites for sure.
7/17/2005 c1
52AboveTheSalt
Sweet message. 8th stanza from the bottom, "too" should be "to". I don't really see how your friend could be a Christian and not believe that Jesus loves him, but that's beside the point.
-salt.

Sweet message. 8th stanza from the bottom, "too" should be "to". I don't really see how your friend could be a Christian and not believe that Jesus loves him, but that's beside the point.
-salt.