for The Fault Is Mine10/19/2005 c1 
183writerforever
Tragic and heartbreaking. I love this poem. I can relate to it, the feelings and everything. Going on my favs :).
183writerforeverTragic and heartbreaking. I love this poem. I can relate to it, the feelings and everything. Going on my favs :).
7/23/2005 c1 Mala Nocis
I LOVE IT! It is always strange just how another person's poem can mirror how another feels. Keep writing!
I LOVE IT! It is always strange just how another person's poem can mirror how another feels. Keep writing!
7/21/2005 c1 28The Melissa Occult
Gothic girl in black are hot, girls in blue with brown hair are not.
Now there's a poem for you. (hah)
Anyhow, I enjoyed the poem, indulging in darkness is fun every once in a while. You don't have a profile so I don't really have anything to talk about, since I usually say something about the author in the review because I like to type a lot and waste my time and write very long run on sentences like this one. Anyhow, it was a good poem, I enjoyed reading it.
28The Melissa OccultGothic girl in black are hot, girls in blue with brown hair are not.
Now there's a poem for you. (hah)
Anyhow, I enjoyed the poem, indulging in darkness is fun every once in a while. You don't have a profile so I don't really have anything to talk about, since I usually say something about the author in the review because I like to type a lot and waste my time and write very long run on sentences like this one. Anyhow, it was a good poem, I enjoyed reading it.
7/19/2005 c1 1UnfortunateFortunate
This is the best thing since Mac & Cheese! =P It rocks! Keep writing! See ya later! By the way, Draco Malfoy Rocks! And it did have a happy ending, it did! *runs away and trys to convince myself while holding my precious book* You know what I'm talking about...
1UnfortunateFortunateThis is the best thing since Mac & Cheese! =P It rocks! Keep writing! See ya later! By the way, Draco Malfoy Rocks! And it did have a happy ending, it did! *runs away and trys to convince myself while holding my precious book* You know what I'm talking about...
7/19/2005 c1 RidX7
I like that you rhyme in spite of structure. This poem doesn't repeat itself like a lot of the stuff I see on here... good. Keep writing.
I like that you rhyme in spite of structure. This poem doesn't repeat itself like a lot of the stuff I see on here... good. Keep writing.