for So Twisted8/21/2011 c1 
13youngin-matomon
Ah. The One That Got Away story, huh? I liked it, but I didn't love it. It was okay so you get a 6 out of 10. :)
13youngin-matomonAh. The One That Got Away story, huh? I liked it, but I didn't love it. It was okay so you get a 6 out of 10. :)
10/31/2010 c1 WishBlade
Beautiful =] And the fact that there wasn't a happily ever after made it a lot more powerful.
Beautiful =] And the fact that there wasn't a happily ever after made it a lot more powerful.
3/27/2010 c1 iiHEARTyuu
I liked this :) it was heaps interesting. If you ever decide to continue it, I'd totally read it.
I liked this :) it was heaps interesting. If you ever decide to continue it, I'd totally read it.
4/22/2009 c1 Boo
this doesn't feel finished
this doesn't feel finished
4/5/2009 c1 1AlphaBeatKayGee
You should def. continue this if you've ever got time. Its got a grt start to it but feels incomplete.
1AlphaBeatKayGeeYou should def. continue this if you've ever got time. Its got a grt start to it but feels incomplete.
7/20/2005 c1 risarisarisa
Oh, I know you said this was a one-shot but I wish you'd write more, it seems like a good beginning to a story.
Oh, I know you said this was a one-shot but I wish you'd write more, it seems like a good beginning to a story.
7/20/2005 c1 3MountainStream
I must say i disagree with the other reviewer. This piece was great but i dont think that after nine years in which Randy agrees were screwed up by this guy that she would just walk away in this manner. This piece while good in itself makes you want more
3MountainStreamI must say i disagree with the other reviewer. This piece was great but i dont think that after nine years in which Randy agrees were screwed up by this guy that she would just walk away in this manner. This piece while good in itself makes you want more
7/20/2005 c1 2Impetus
This was pretty good. I noticed that a lot of the time that Holden was saying 'I broke of my engagement'. Should it be off? The whole premise of an ex-boyfriend breaking up a two year relationship in the blink of an eye because he saw his ex who he hasn't seen in nine years seems a little far fetched. But, anythings possible in fiction. I do like the fact that she didn't go crawling back to him in the end. I think that's the strongest aspect of this piece. Good job.
2ImpetusThis was pretty good. I noticed that a lot of the time that Holden was saying 'I broke of my engagement'. Should it be off? The whole premise of an ex-boyfriend breaking up a two year relationship in the blink of an eye because he saw his ex who he hasn't seen in nine years seems a little far fetched. But, anythings possible in fiction. I do like the fact that she didn't go crawling back to him in the end. I think that's the strongest aspect of this piece. Good job.