
6/7/2014 c8 Guest
What the hell, man. I see here that you haven't updated for more than eight years. This is a really good story. After reading Brian's story, I know what's the ending, but how we get there is what is exciting me. I'm just twitching for the next chapter. Start writing again. Come on. Please. Pretty please. With a cherry on top.
What the hell, man. I see here that you haven't updated for more than eight years. This is a really good story. After reading Brian's story, I know what's the ending, but how we get there is what is exciting me. I'm just twitching for the next chapter. Start writing again. Come on. Please. Pretty please. With a cherry on top.
4/18/2014 c8 staar
loved all your writing, but this one is the best...To bad you haven't finished it, cause their stort should be awesome...
loved all your writing, but this one is the best...To bad you haven't finished it, cause their stort should be awesome...
2/11/2012 c8 Xxx.Promise.To.Love.You.xxX
I hate Edison so much! I wish you'd skip the story to the scene where Grant saves Cody because I can't watch Edison with him.
I hate Edison so much! I wish you'd skip the story to the scene where Grant saves Cody because I can't watch Edison with him.
9/16/2011 c8 Edward Cousens
I was so surprised when the story ended at CHapter 8-I was looking forward to more. I know that it has been sometime since you wrote these, but I would like it if you filled in more of this backstory. I do enjoy your work even though there are afew grammatical errors that a good proofreader would catch for you.
Best wishes at a task that you so obviously enjoy.
I was so surprised when the story ended at CHapter 8-I was looking forward to more. I know that it has been sometime since you wrote these, but I would like it if you filled in more of this backstory. I do enjoy your work even though there are afew grammatical errors that a good proofreader would catch for you.
Best wishes at a task that you so obviously enjoy.
7/12/2009 c1 CemelDosce
Hey, I loved the Moving On stories and the spin-offs you created, but I was wondering if you were going to finish Cody and Grant's story?
Hey, I loved the Moving On stories and the spin-offs you created, but I was wondering if you were going to finish Cody and Grant's story?
1/30/2009 c8 i-see-faeries
Wow. Different start from how I imagined. I can tell it's going to be a lot of drama. Can't wait for more. Loving this!
Wow. Different start from how I imagined. I can tell it's going to be a lot of drama. Can't wait for more. Loving this!
12/7/2008 c7
71Subbie
FP is being evil and not letting me review on chapter 8 for some reason. XD.
Well, anyways, I can't wait for more, and please can we have more cody? I love cody.
Lee

FP is being evil and not letting me review on chapter 8 for some reason. XD.
Well, anyways, I can't wait for more, and please can we have more cody? I love cody.
Lee
10/11/2008 c8 Subbie
Aww! that's it? I like the idea of grant and cody haveing a backstory, it would seem like it didn't really fit if you didn't write it! It seems to be going really slow, but I'm sure it will pick up soon! I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Lee
Aww! that's it? I like the idea of grant and cody haveing a backstory, it would seem like it didn't really fit if you didn't write it! It seems to be going really slow, but I'm sure it will pick up soon! I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Lee
9/28/2008 c8 DefineNightmare
I growl at every mention of Edison...
is that normal?
Cody, Derek, and Grant are sweet xD
update sooN!
I growl at every mention of Edison...
is that normal?
Cody, Derek, and Grant are sweet xD
update sooN!
1/21/2008 c7 April
PLEASE update this soon! This story has the potential to be even better then Take Me From This Pain (which was great!).
PLEASE update this soon! This story has the potential to be even better then Take Me From This Pain (which was great!).
6/29/2007 c8
1Hanada
=O Though this is the first time reviewing one of your stories, I have to say I like your writing style! And I like how you get better and better with each chapter. :3
And with this particular story, I'm really loving Grant! Your characterization of him is pretty awesome! And I loved this chapter, paralelling between how Edison acts and how Grant acts. It really brings what these characters are about!
I know it's been a long time since you last updated this story but I really hope you do sometime!

=O Though this is the first time reviewing one of your stories, I have to say I like your writing style! And I like how you get better and better with each chapter. :3
And with this particular story, I'm really loving Grant! Your characterization of him is pretty awesome! And I loved this chapter, paralelling between how Edison acts and how Grant acts. It really brings what these characters are about!
I know it's been a long time since you last updated this story but I really hope you do sometime!
2/20/2007 c8
2yuri sasou
I like this story Very much... I know you have many other stories but please don't forget to update Cody and Grant soon! Although the thought that I'll have to read Cody's sufferrings in the near future saddens me (

I like this story Very much... I know you have many other stories but please don't forget to update Cody and Grant soon! Although the thought that I'll have to read Cody's sufferrings in the near future saddens me (