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for Franklin Regional High School: An Ode

1/29/2007 c1 4Sakka-Fenikkusu
Wow, this is brilliant. I love the overall style and feel of it - the ending might've been a little weaker than expected, but it still gathered together your thoughts and wrapped it up well. Thanks for gracing the writing world with this gem.

Sakka-Fenikkusu
7/15/2006 c1 CandyCaneCarnage
I really like this. A lot of graphic immagery that translates directly into emotions that most high schoolers feel on a daily basis. Just a beautiful poem.
12/30/2005 c1 73Jezsh
I adore the pride and power in this. I love how it strength does not diminish the so real human emotion within.
12/15/2005 c1 94smile persephone
Your use of repetition is highly effective. It enhances the mood and tone of the poem quite nicely. I don't think that the bolding technique worked well, because the emphasis is already in place without it. I love the allusion to the cyclops. Nicely done!
7/25/2005 c1 1Better Left Unknown
Very powerful... many people have trouble conveying emotion like that.

A little graphic for my taste, but hey, that's just me.
7/20/2005 c1 281ThisCut-UpAngel
And this reminds me of the dear high school I still attend. . .Amazing work I must say!
7/20/2005 c1 Elizabeth Bilberry
it's powerful. :smiles: i like it alot.

EB
7/20/2005 c1 53destinee ariarti
amazing .. use of repetition is especially powerful, as a common theme throughout, and then again at the end.

amazing work. this is going to be added to my favorites.

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