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7/22/2005 c1 169flaming.footprints
ooh this is good. Very creative, good job
7/22/2005 c1 67The Juggler 42
Nifty! Fun sound play. I think if the whole thing had a closer format to either of the couplets in the first stanza it might be even better; more screwy, you could say. Also, you give the third line three extra syllables so it matches the first? Just a thought. Anyway, as you probably know, I love fun word manipulations like these. Cheers!

(And thanks for reviewing! :-)
7/22/2005 c1 1Denim and Soccer
That was great! I think you would like my story "Along Came Elliot" :)

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